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Tide Christmas

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Just an idea we were throwing around the office, not sure about it.
we were think perhaps replace the ink with gravey from a christmas lunch or something,
let us know what your thinking

oh and it wouldn't be for tide, it'd be for an aussie brand just using tide for spec stuff

-SCRATCH 'N' SNIFF

Comments

JamaisVu's picture 292 pencils

I personally love it :-) Nice ad.

thirty6chambers's picture 1468 pencils

the idea is mediocre. the visual pun isn't clever enough to stand out.

Navino's picture 123 pencils

What you thought here could be quantified, cause its a decent idea but there that punch that is missing . . . look at it and you will find it.

dadada's picture 345 pencils

maybe i would inverse colors of ink and shirt

JamaisVu's picture 292 pencils

There's nthg such as white ink.

shahidali's picture 1694 pencils

inital response: its a copy based ad. the visual has been done repppppppppppppppeatedly...
now, do we have a strong copy in it?
i'm less enthusiastic...
may be u can also work out a different route...
on a separate note: the connection between the visual and the copy is 'good'. If the brand is on an introductory 'awareness' level, the communication may work...
shahid

shahid

jimchristianx's picture 116 pencils

fail

askon's picture 423 pencils

I would change the hue of that pen top, compared to the ink it looks purple, otherwise i have no problems with it...

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NAB's picture 7 pencils

i think its a really cool idea

Martijn's picture 604 pencils

Cute concept. I'm not shore if you need the Christmas tree, it could work, like you say, also with an other kind of stain...

Guest's picture

This idea was done better here: http://flickr.com/photos/vccgraphics/2216371829/

Please try again.

DaMon's picture 503 pencils

Doesn't work. Stain is unwanted and here you are showing Tide will clean up your x-mas tree. Otherway round may be better where the clean part is perhaps the tree.

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