satan's picture
181 pencils

First one is WOW... second one is cool... rest spoils the party.

ivan's picture

I don't get it. Pls explain.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

mancrepublic's picture
62 pencils

I actually prefer the last two. They make a better campaign and have attitude.
Work a little on the art direction; drop the drop shadow, play with some more fonts and tone the colour down.

Like the copy.

This should be in the exhibition forum by the way;)

popdistortion's picture
1594 pencils

I agree. These have a nice story in there. The line "you think it, we stock it" is great. Just art direction definitely needs loads of work. Just listen to what mancrepublic had to say.

Mahmood_Alam's picture
391 pencils

first two is great. last two need art direction... rework... new layout. rest is not executed well.
but shri shri dabhaveji 10008ji is rocking.

good work dude.

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Beatles's picture
47 pencils

Vijay, atleast remove the watermark.

navkriti's picture
77 pencils

first n foremost

plz create a corbis id

otherwise also ... its not worth giving comments

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