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ivan's picture
ivan

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ajiteshv's picture
ajiteshv
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The helmet manufacturers, Studds, in this case.

rikitiki's picture
rikitiki
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Pretty Funny. I'm sure you can think of "funnier" and "stupider" situations (although I like the deadpan feel of your photos....good comedic sensibility). Push the idea.

I would work on the line though. The sentence structure is just a tiny bit awkward.

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ajiteshv
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Thank you The Count,

You can give the credit of situations not being "funnier" and "stupider" to the
scarcity of the camera in office and models atthe right time :)
Thanks anyways.

Any suggestions for the line? I intented to keep it simple.

rikitiki's picture
rikitiki
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Ajitesh--off the top of my head:
"Wearing a helmet is never stupid. Especially when you're driving."

"Safety is never stupid."

"Safety is never stupid. Especially when you're driving."

"Don't be stupid, wear a helmet."

"You can never be too safe."

At first glance, I think there might be a little confusion as to what the ad is for (or, at least, Studds is not a popular brand where I'm from).
You might have more freedom with the line if the logo says "Studds Helmets".
Also, people do not always associate the word "driving" with motorcycles.

As for the scarcity of camera opportunities in your office....keep it that way. I love the feel of these photos. Somehow, they possess silly/clever humor....and it's hard for Silly to be clever.

ajiteshv's picture
ajiteshv
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Thanks for your efforts friend.
And yes, I intended to keep the situations very routine.

Your comments are well appriciated.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
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or....
"you think it's funny? it saved my life once"
"you think it's funny? wait till the quake comes"
"you think it's funny? OK, I'm funny and safe then"

blink's picture
blink
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bad hair day??

funny!!!

stsanto's picture
stsanto
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haha.. i like it.

ajiteshv's picture
ajiteshv
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Thx guys... The count, stsanto, blink... thx a lot.

whitespace's picture
whitespace
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Yeah rewording the word "driving" to "riding" helps a lot.

I was wondering who other than those racers would wear a helmet in a car. :)

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bknowlden
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I'm sorry, but these seem fairly shallow in thought.
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Bob Cruz's picture
Bob Cruz
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It's cool...but I think whitespace is right. You should change "driving" to "riding". Unless it's a cultural

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ajiteshv's picture
ajiteshv
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Thanks Bob,

I would certainly make the changes.

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