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Stop Smoking
Submitted by CreatEve on Wed, 2008-03-26 15:37.
Copy- Brajesh Soni
Visualization- Brajesh Soni
I have used the idea of Smoking=SmokeKing
Means Cigarette is "Smoke's King" but we are
human being and cigarette smoking causes many
unwanted diseases so take care
of your health dont become the slave of it.
"Stop Smoking".
Comments
The play on words just doesn't seem to make any convincing argument against smoking, and the execution is atrocious.
I also think there is something wrong with the sizes of all fonts. It's hard for me to check the first line even though the nature of people is to read the first line first. First time I saw that, my eyes went to the red STOP icon, and I don't think you need to put that icon. You just put the word STOP instead of that icon I think it's enough for the audiences to get it. You put too many things on it. Simplify it!!! and it more intersting. I think you be able to play with the word "king" more to tell the audience to stop smoking. It is not just say "STOP SMOKING" I don't think u need "What are you?" it makes me confused. Anyway, there is something to play around with this idea, I like what u want to say, but you need to find more right way to say it. :)
this is ludicrous. your explanation is even more confusing than the ad.
Please, do yourself a favour, and destroy this. Crumple up the hard copies, delete the paint documents. I don't want to come off as too rude, but this is atrocious.
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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.
hey, there is a good side to this
IT HASN'T BEEN DONE BEFORE!
- Here I should have written something smarter -
If you have to explain an idea it doesn't work.
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