the idea just isnt right, when ur approaching a brief or client just machine gun as many different approaches and ideas as you can, you cant be too proud of any of them, one of the most important skills in this biz is being able to kill an idea you love, and make something that works better, it will happen alot.
bin this and think of a new concept.
I totally agree. A lot of the time U'll wind up producing something you yourself find clever because it's a kind of inside joke, i.e. you;re the only one who gets it. B2k%'s dead-on...this is way off the mark and doesn't translate. I get the point you're trying to make, but when you;re coming up with the new version, keep asking yourself: Will people really relate to this?
Hi, you aren't lacking anywhere. You are on the right track, just a little behind. :-) Budding creatieves generally come up with these googled ideas. No worries.
To me media is the ship called Titanic. The passengers are the target audience (TA). Among them there are a few of us, the ad people: the ad analysts. And the piece of communication is the iceberg. Which’s 1/10 is visible and 9/10 is under the water. And being an adman and, that too, with 12-years of experience, it will be kiddish for me to make any such comment seeing only the 1/10 portion of the iceberg. The passengers can do it, but if we, the admen do the same, it’s not done. So show me the complete 10/10. I will comment certainly.
oh wow whats creativity... ok thanks i will improve myself according to these expectations...
i like it..
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my dear young buddy, u don't need to improve urself to my expetations. but only live up to your self expectations and compete with self. and elevate urself a notch up from ur previous day's self-stature.
just keep three things in mind -
1. always love ur work but not blindly. reason being plain and simple, if u can't love ur own work, how could u expect others will do it? but yeah, keep an eye open to punish ur work the most ruthless way, if need be.
2. minds are convoluted. and only a convoluted mind always cries for simplicity. which is why, before u can think simple, make ur mind, ur soul, and urself simple. rest will be a cakewalk then.
3. if u can't like ur ad after three days with the same intensity and passion as u did on the very first day when u just produced it, simply throw this ad into the bin. even if someone suggests that u might win a lion for it.
hope, i'm clear to you.
so put ur money on ur idea... and keep rolling and rocking... chill ;)
and how does that "reason" justify to not giving better feedback? sorry but i can really make no sense out of your metaphore. please stick to rule number one in advertising and keep your message simple. no offence
Submitted by wearmysocks on Wed, 2008-03-26 13:52.
You spelt correctly wrong, in a line telling people to spell correctly. lol
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i have mentioned what Google gives suggestions, when you give any wrong or not existing keywords.
Check out. Before lol....
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"Consumer is no Moron; she is your Wife"
The idea is nice. But unfortunately it has already been done for tiger
Secondly, I don't think the 'suggestions and try correct spelling key words is required'. It's just an additional layer which is not required. Your idea becomes clear when the audience reads that the line ' your search didn't match any documents'
Hi Gunjan thanks...
Yeah many persons have suggested me that instead of giving that suggestion just give those suggestions by which one can save the tree.
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"Consumer is not a Moron; she is your Wife"
Google has acclaimed that whatever is exist in Universe if you cant find on Google, that is not exist...
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"Consumer is no Moron; she is your Wife"
nice IDEA. simple.I like the idea. You have a full sense of simplicity...Prosposition you should put off the seconds line. Just pust the first line BIGGER...
Hi Alialli i am getting what you want to say.
What is Pandol. Can you give me the link..
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The idea doesn't work. I would bag it, start over,
aspiring_creative, where am i lacking? Can you suggest me?
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the idea just isnt right, when ur approaching a brief or client just machine gun as many different approaches and ideas as you can, you cant be too proud of any of them, one of the most important skills in this biz is being able to kill an idea you love, and make something that works better, it will happen alot.
bin this and think of a new concept.
www.bahonsadvertising.co.uk
I totally agree. A lot of the time U'll wind up producing something you yourself find clever because it's a kind of inside joke, i.e. you;re the only one who gets it. B2k%'s dead-on...this is way off the mark and doesn't translate. I get the point you're trying to make, but when you;re coming up with the new version, keep asking yourself: Will people really relate to this?
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Hi, you aren't lacking anywhere. You are on the right track, just a little behind. :-) Budding creatieves generally come up with these googled ideas. No worries.
Thank you Jaggy..
yah i am on initial stage doing PG in Advtg
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Good, I liked idea.
Think, Act, Invent.
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http://captonjohn.blogspot.com
thank you Capton jhon, so you like this. can u suggest me any way of art direction?
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art direction is fine you dont have much to play with, its a google sheet.
www.bahonsadvertising.co.uk
before u receive comments and react to the same... why don't u provide all of us a line or two, describing the following points -
1. what would be your consumer touch points, i mean where will this piece of ommunication be exposed?
2. what objective u wanna meet with ur piece of communication, i mean what's ur call to action?
3. what's exactly ur idea?
man, execution can be a helluva lot and different. so don't waste ur sleep on execution. rather slip into ideas, and dwell on it.
and, if you ask me, i think u have the germ of ideas. so no worries! be urself. and keep woking. rest will follow... :)
Many many thanks to you Sushovan, i will follow your suggestions but what about this ad?
any comment?
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To me media is the ship called Titanic. The passengers are the target audience (TA). Among them there are a few of us, the ad people: the ad analysts. And the piece of communication is the iceberg. Which’s 1/10 is visible and 9/10 is under the water. And being an adman and, that too, with 12-years of experience, it will be kiddish for me to make any such comment seeing only the 1/10 portion of the iceberg. The passengers can do it, but if we, the admen do the same, it’s not done. So show me the complete 10/10. I will comment certainly.
oh wow whats creativity... ok thanks i will improve myself according to these expectations...
i like it..
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"Consumer is not Moron; she is your Wife"
my dear young buddy, u don't need to improve urself to my expetations. but only live up to your self expectations and compete with self. and elevate urself a notch up from ur previous day's self-stature.
just keep three things in mind -
1. always love ur work but not blindly. reason being plain and simple, if u can't love ur own work, how could u expect others will do it? but yeah, keep an eye open to punish ur work the most ruthless way, if need be.
2. minds are convoluted. and only a convoluted mind always cries for simplicity. which is why, before u can think simple, make ur mind, ur soul, and urself simple. rest will be a cakewalk then.
3. if u can't like ur ad after three days with the same intensity and passion as u did on the very first day when u just produced it, simply throw this ad into the bin. even if someone suggests that u might win a lion for it.
hope, i'm clear to you.
so put ur money on ur idea... and keep rolling and rocking... chill ;)
Oh gawd!! Puhleeze!!!
www.wordsofbabel.blogspot.com
so full of Sh*t!
www.wordsofbabel.blogspot.com
sh*t??!! where?? on ur face??? oh sh*t!! ;)
what the heck are you talking about?
and how does that "reason" justify to not giving better feedback? sorry but i can really make no sense out of your metaphore. please stick to rule number one in advertising and keep your message simple. no offence
Thank you all for such valuable comments
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"Consumer is no Moron; she is your Wife"
You spelt correctly wrong, in a line telling people to spell correctly. lol
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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.
i have mentioned what Google gives suggestions, when you give any wrong or not existing keywords.
Check out. Before lol....
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"Consumer is no Moron; she is your Wife"
What?
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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.
really out of the box idea.
very good.
love it.... Cheer guyss!!!!
thanks n keep commenting on onwards ads..
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"Consumer is no Moron; she is your Wife"
The idea is nice. But unfortunately it has already been done for tiger
Secondly, I don't think the 'suggestions and try correct spelling key words is required'. It's just an additional layer which is not required. Your idea becomes clear when the audience reads that the line ' your search didn't match any documents'
Hi Gunjan thanks...
Yeah many persons have suggested me that instead of giving that suggestion just give those suggestions by which one can save the tree.
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"Consumer is not a Moron; she is your Wife"
You mean you cant find things that are gone on google?
Google has acclaimed that whatever is exist in Universe if you cant find on Google, that is not exist...
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"Consumer is no Moron; she is your Wife"
nice IDEA. simple.I like the idea. You have a full sense of simplicity...Prosposition you should put off the seconds line. Just pust the first line BIGGER...
Thank you Ray Lebel.... I wiil work on your suggestions
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"Consumer is not a Moron; she is your Wife"
Hey do chk out panadol creatives at forum
Hi Alialli i am getting what you want to say.
What is Pandol. Can you give me the link..
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"Consumer is not a Moron; she is your Wife"
whoa... did you spend a grand-spanking total of two seconds on an idea and another three on executing it?
kill this. it's soooooo obvious.
what would be missing without trees? what's the problem with a treeless world?
GOOD WORK MAN.,
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