Hi Jalpa,
-As Ivan says, there's no obvious connection between a match and the issue of racism (unless your angle is a very philosophical one, which in turn might be unsuitable for advertising as it'd be just too complicated). I do understand your thinking here, but go find a better and more relevant solution.
-Your copy needs work. Simplify it and pay attention to grammar, get rid of question- and exclamation marks and pick a suitable font for your ad.
-Work on your art, do better photography and don't over-use Photoshop. It's easily spotted whether or not you're good at it.
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I don't see the relevance of matches.
Hi Jalpa,
-As Ivan says, there's no obvious connection between a match and the issue of racism (unless your angle is a very philosophical one, which in turn might be unsuitable for advertising as it'd be just too complicated). I do understand your thinking here, but go find a better and more relevant solution.
-Your copy needs work. Simplify it and pay attention to grammar, get rid of question- and exclamation marks and pick a suitable font for your ad.
-Work on your art, do better photography and don't over-use Photoshop. It's easily spotted whether or not you're good at it.
Cheers:)
i like the way danje has expressed his views.
thx 4 your comments, i will rework on it.
why is the burned match BLACK?
they usually are....
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