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S'mores Bar
Submitted by aspiring_creative on Wed, 2008-02-27 19:55.
My first ad! Too simple to include in my book?
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smokey's happy cause it involves no fire?
you need a better and different interpretation on this idea.
Thank you for the feedback.
Yea, that was the idea. Traditionally S'mores being made using a camp fire, somthing Smokey hates. New S'mores Bar eliminates the open flame . . . Smokey happy.
More comments please. Just quit my job to pursue my dream career in the advertising industry!
nope dont like this. too simple. the links is tenuous at best. its smokeys head im seeing not meaning to be picky but wheres his body. ur logo is too big. the typeface doesnt have to be charcoaly either, be careful when choosing your typefaces, if your saying open flame in your copy, you dont need to show it with the font, just chose one that sits well with your image and doesnt try to encroach on your idea.
not as good as your other work, dont put it in your book, it'd bring it down..
Bad execution. Smokey is looking scary.
Don't like it purely because I got slated for using that type face once :P and it isn't a nice font. Keep going though!! Try different type faces that one is very ugly :)
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Yeah, sorry. Not loving it. You may get a better response from Americans, but I don't think so.
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Is that typeface "Papyrus"?
I see it used all the time by corporate people who have no idea about design (not saying I do). It just kinda of shows that it may not be the best choice to show off your work. Just a small tip for the future.
This Smokey looks like he intends on starting many, many forest fires.
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