Hm. you need the context to an airport. Or is it supposed to be an ad somewere in an airport? And how about: "not all fog delays departure. Some can cancel you." or something
fog not only delays planes but can cause a crash so is smoking right! but why aeroplane anology?Unless it's put within the airport or airline magazine. Then it will be good.
its good. but 'not all fog delay the departure' i dont know it just doesnt flow for me. trying wording it slightly differently. the words should slide off my tongue.
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Hm. you need the context to an airport. Or is it supposed to be an ad somewere in an airport? And how about: "not all fog delays departure. Some can cancel you." or something
hmmm, in this case the line n some smoke in the background is sufficient for d purpose... thats y i dont wanna 2 make it layerd.......
Oh, damn! forget what i said. the line's great - just didn't got it right ;)
good work! something different
wat different.... plzz clearify....
hmmm....nice one
fog not only delays planes but can cause a crash so is smoking right! but why aeroplane anology?Unless it's put within the airport or airline magazine. Then it will be good.
departed means someone is dead. airport or airline magazines would be best, but i think it works without too
dam! I agree its cleaver and its great.even in cities it can run.
its good. but 'not all fog delay the departure' i dont know it just doesnt flow for me. trying wording it slightly differently. the words should slide off my tongue.
GOOD WORK. WILL WORK BOTH ABOVE AND BELOW THE SKY.
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