Smoke Kills


Submitted by eugenius on Mon, 2008-05-12 11:06.

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Light it up... and forget Father's Day

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Submitted by WhereIsMyBackPay on Mon, 2008-05-12 11:25.

Are those supposed to be sperms?

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Submitted by eugenius on Mon, 2008-05-12 21:46.

yes it's sperm.

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Submitted by eugenius on Mon, 2008-05-12 21:48.

died Sperm.

Submitted by Mansoor Bhatti on Tue, 2008-05-13 01:48.

I Like the copy...But visual needs some more work...right now the visual says alot. You might just need the matchsticks....dont put the cigarette and you can just have the line
in a nice tiny font. That should serve the pupose

Mansoor
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Submitted by ivan on Tue, 2008-05-13 08:32.

I agree with Mansoor.

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Submitted by eugenius on Tue, 2008-05-13 10:08.

cool guys :-)

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Submitted by eugenius on Tue, 2008-05-13 02:09.

ok will do.

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Submitted by alvinpck on Tue, 2008-05-13 02:29.

I like the idea and metaphor.
But the matches do not look like sperms, need to improve on that.
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http://alvinpck.deviantart.com/gallery/