Sleeping pills






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erezruby's picture

I guess everyone is still sleeping...

I like it. It's a different look at things. My problem here is the copy. It works too hard to explain what the visual says easily. Either go for "Fast asleep" or "sleep faster" in that direction. First one sounds better to me.

erezruby's picture

toda

loader's picture

like it too, agree with BFB the line ''fast asleep'' would fit better.

erezruby's picture

thanks

for what it's worth... I chuckled.

erezruby's picture

Now this must be the shortest comment I've ever
received from you...
Do you think it would work with other letters as well? (a / w / q)

I think that would be pushing it. right now you're saying "it's a shortcut to tinkerbell" ... find two other ways of saying that and you have a campaign.

i do not understand?

could you explain?

ivan's picture

Me neither. Please explain!!! :)

erezruby's picture

Yyyyyy is just before Zzzzzzzz.....

Funky_Frogii's picture

its goooooooooood dude.......

love anything creative
http://addot.blogspot.com/

I just got problem with the background colour tho... my eyes are tired now, maybe just a subjective view, but I think I prefer black or white.

erezruby's picture

are you saying you are falling asleep just from looking at the ad?
Now that's a great concept!!!

:)

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