I like it. It's a different look at things. My problem here is the copy. It works too hard to explain what the visual says easily. Either go for "Fast asleep" or "sleep faster" in that direction. First one sounds better to me.
I think that would be pushing it. right now you're saying "it's a shortcut to tinkerbell" ... find two other ways of saying that and you have a campaign.
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I guess everyone is still sleeping...
I like it. It's a different look at things. My problem here is the copy. It works too hard to explain what the visual says easily. Either go for "Fast asleep" or "sleep faster" in that direction. First one sounds better to me.
toda
like it too, agree with BFB the line ''fast asleep'' would fit better.
thanks
for what it's worth... I chuckled.
Now this must be the shortest comment I've ever
received from you...
Do you think it would work with other letters as well? (a / w / q)
I think that would be pushing it. right now you're saying "it's a shortcut to tinkerbell" ... find two other ways of saying that and you have a campaign.
i do not understand?
could you explain?
Me neither. Please explain!!! :)
Yyyyyy is just before Zzzzzzzz.....
its goooooooooood dude.......
love anything creative
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I just got problem with the background colour tho... my eyes are tired now, maybe just a subjective view, but I think I prefer black or white.
are you saying you are falling asleep just from looking at the ad?
Now that's a great concept!!!
:)
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