Why not a continuous strip of foot prints, gradually turning from dark to light?
Showing two might give an impression of two different person. Which does not prove your claim of "light weight after slimming".
A lot of similar ads of people on the beach with no footprints have been done in the past. I'm not going to look it up because it's something you really should know when you're acting this cocky and being rude to people who take the time to comment on your ad and even try to help you improve it. This attitude won't get you very far my friend, nor will fake comments.
Yes, people don't often join by two or three at the same time and then comment on the same ad on the same day it was posted. Being here a while these things get obvious.
I don't like it, the execution is forced, I feels like it was the first idea the designer could came up with. If he had thought a little bit more it could have been better...
And even if the idea is "good", is still old for me.
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nice.good....when he comes in he is over weiged and when he leaves ,he looses weight,keep it up.
love anything creative.
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Why not a continuous strip of foot prints, gradually turning from dark to light?
Showing two might give an impression of two different person. Which does not prove your claim of "light weight after slimming".
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The point is... before & after you come to slimming.
Don't you see is a same shoe print. duhh....Cut the crab bro.
Ah~ another before and after. How interesting...
By the way, it's "crap" if you intended to say that; and "shoeS" come in pair, unless you are doing something for Johnie Walker.
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Cool but the execution still can improve further.
Idea's ok. can improve on the art?
A lot of similar ads of people on the beach with no footprints have been done in the past. I'm not going to look it up because it's something you really should know when you're acting this cocky and being rude to people who take the time to comment on your ad and even try to help you improve it. This attitude won't get you very far my friend, nor will fake comments.
You do notice of the fake comments.
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http://alvinpck.deviantart.com/gallery/
Yes, people don't often join by two or three at the same time and then comment on the same ad on the same day it was posted. Being here a while these things get obvious.
love it......................
love anything creative
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this idea has ben done. done better.
nice try, but nothing new.
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walaah,... idea is good but not the execution. Nothing impressed for people...
where's joe la pompe when we need him?
good and simple
I don't like it, the execution is forced, I feels like it was the first idea the designer could came up with. If he had thought a little bit more it could have been better...
And even if the idea is "good", is still old for me.
there is an ad that I think you can even find on here for men's health that features pretty much this idea just a lot better executed.