my dear frnd, to b logical trees save evry thing coz even wen u breath the,carbondioxide u exhale n oxygen u inhale is given by trees so trees save u n dats y u should also save trees.. (how evr there r trillions of other things in trees help us but this 1was specific)..
my ad means that v'l have to save that thing which is saving us.. buildings r growing in faster rate to the direction in which that 1tree is standing n in this fast construction v r ignoring that trees r getting lesser.. anything else Mr. Wordnerd or shud i give u the brief of the ad with an atachment??
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bhavdeep if you have to explain your idea, its not good.
you should only be really explaining
what you were trying to do
who its aimed at or cultural background information.
otherwise you're communication is convoluted and wrong.
I suppose if you ran this as a double page spread with the brief opposite and some notes about why this is good advertising and why the person should buy the product. Whilst forcing them to read it at gunpoint the message would get across.
jeeezus bhavdeep
why are you so agressive? Yopur ad is not clear and after explaining not good.
accept that fact, that's why you post it
defend it with reasonable arguements
if you just want good comments, show it to your mother only.
Submitted by Mr. Positive on Fri, 2008-08-01 20:45.
It doesn't make sense because we do not have more buildings than trees. We will never be able to build more buildings than we have trees.
So are we supposed to stop construction all over the world?
Should we all put down the tools of our independent trades and plant trees?
What do you want me to do?
Let's say for a second nobody has ever done the sparse, vector, live trace thing.
We'll assume everyone who lays their orbs on this layout will definitely stop and look at it for longer than two seconds.
Then what?
What happens now?
What do you want from me?
Money?
a Blessing?
Chocolate Cake?
WHAT?
I really don't get it either. If it's awareness that trees provide oxygen (which people know anyways), this isn't even conveying that. Line's decent (I personally think it might be more accurate if it were "Trees save. Save trees."), but since visual makes no sense to me I find the line to be meaningless. Also, I don't know how to react to it. Save trees ... okay, what do I do, who do I speak with, what do I buy, do I donate, who's telling me to save trees, where do I get more info? etc.
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good 1 ! intersting like dit!cheers!
dude,its appealing .....good......like it........\
take out the reflection under the tree
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thanks for the appreciation funky n prannebbera..
i don't get it. what do trees save?
my dear frnd, to b logical trees save evry thing coz even wen u breath the,carbondioxide u exhale n oxygen u inhale is given by trees so trees save u n dats y u should also save trees.. (how evr there r trillions of other things in trees help us but this 1was specific)..
yes, i know trees are super cool and all. but what does your ad tell me?
I don't get it either
my ad means that v'l have to save that thing which is saving us.. buildings r growing in faster rate to the direction in which that 1tree is standing n in this fast construction v r ignoring that trees r getting lesser.. anything else Mr. Wordnerd or shud i give u the brief of the ad with an atachment??
great. another smartass. i don't have time for this crap.
Ads of the World is a commercial advertising archive and community showcasing the best and most defensive arguementative reactions to advertising critique worldwide.
bhavdeep if you have to explain your idea, its not good.
you should only be really explaining
what you were trying to do
who its aimed at or cultural background information.
otherwise you're communication is convoluted and wrong.
I suppose if you ran this as a double page spread with the brief opposite and some notes about why this is good advertising and why the person should buy the product. Whilst forcing them to read it at gunpoint the message would get across.
otherwise get that pen and paper out again.
www.bahonsadvertising.co.uk
drop the attitude
your idea is not clear at all.... i hope you can see that.
sir u all r senior n i m sorry if the thing hurt u.. n most of all the comment was not for u.. btw wat cud hav made this ad better??
even with your explanation i still don't get it....
so i can't give a 'valuable comment'
hu'z askin u spend ur f****** time?? go n make an ad that can get some gud commenz..
jeeezus bhavdeep
why are you so agressive? Yopur ad is not clear and after explaining not good.
accept that fact, that's why you post it
defend it with reasonable arguements
if you just want good comments, show it to your mother only.
- Here I should have written something smarter -
It doesn't make sense because we do not have more buildings than trees. We will never be able to build more buildings than we have trees.
So are we supposed to stop construction all over the world?
Should we all put down the tools of our independent trades and plant trees?
What do you want me to do?
Let's say for a second nobody has ever done the sparse, vector, live trace thing.
We'll assume everyone who lays their orbs on this layout will definitely stop and look at it for longer than two seconds.
Then what?
What happens now?
What do you want from me?
Money?
a Blessing?
Chocolate Cake?
WHAT?
I'll have some cake if you're offering :D
ta
www.creativeduck.blogspot.com
I really don't get it either. If it's awareness that trees provide oxygen (which people know anyways), this isn't even conveying that. Line's decent (I personally think it might be more accurate if it were "Trees save. Save trees."), but since visual makes no sense to me I find the line to be meaningless. Also, I don't know how to react to it. Save trees ... okay, what do I do, who do I speak with, what do I buy, do I donate, who's telling me to save trees, where do I get more info? etc.
don´t get it
please comments about this ad
http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/exhibition/bic_pen_ad
still don´t get it
i can has a cheezburger wid u an da treez?
It's a dumb ad. Will you all let it go?
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hii every one.. i got it, actually i m a fresher and jzz wantd the valuable commenz.. thanks n i'l c dat i come up wid some brilliant idea and execution next time..
thank you