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gulo's picture
gulo
461 pencils

hey nice..
but only the idea

could have executed far far better.
spend some more time on the art.
this seems to be a prelimnary layout.

but good thought .

for idea 4/5

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

not familiar with indian name here,.. but i guess it's 2 males and 1 female ?
for execution, try to have a wedding invitation, take it from low angle, with flowers, etc... dim light, focus on the names.

restlesssoul.rahul's picture
restlesssoul.rahul
22 pencils

thanx guys,

Mahmood_Alam's picture
Mahmood_Alam
391 pencils

show an invitation card with 2+1 name.
nice idea very bad execution.

Ainadaliel's picture
Ainadaliel
271 pencils

I don't know what infanticide is. HAHA sorry.

Nice idea, though. But a bit overused, with the names bit.

ivan's picture
ivan

I'm not sure I understand it fully, but if it shows guys being in love because girls are not around I don't think I like it.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

wait.. wait.. which one is the male and which one is the female here? I'm afraid I got it wrong too, cos I'm not familiar with the names.

gulo's picture
gulo
461 pencils

Ok this is for you two.

Rajeev and Sunil are the guys. And Manju is the Bride.

Rajeev and Sunil marry Manju due to lack of prospective brides.

Has nothing to do with homosexuality, rather its a threesome. ;)

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

well dude...
if you put two names with heart shape and there is "&" sign, the thing comes to people's mind is "in love". So I guess that's why the homo idea comes.
I thought Sunil was the girl, and while marrying Manju, Sunil has affair with another guy.

Geez... if this is the case, then I guess you need to work with the art again.

gulo's picture
gulo
461 pencils

Ahahahahahahahahahaha.....shit....snifff.....ah man true true!
F**K! I really cracked up on that one.

Ya maybe it should be "+" instead of "&".

but tell you what. It works for the target audience.

man... thanks for the laugh

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

or maybe... put the girl in the middle. simple :)

gulo's picture
gulo
461 pencils

No No... trust me.

there is no problem with the basic placement, its proper
except that "+" sign is more appropriate than "&".
but frankly here in India it will mean the same.
Homosexuality will not crop up in the minds bcoz the public is aware of the subject.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

I see.. I see...
now I wonder how small this box would be if we keep replying.
ahaha... *lol*

gulo's picture
gulo
461 pencils

hmmmn...
lets see and then bug Ivan for any inconvinience

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

haha... give him a break, he just got a baby.
*oops, we're out of topic here* :p

ivan's picture
ivan

Cheers
Don't worry, the box just gets too small and you won't be able to read it. It's a bug in the software.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

Karthik's picture
Karthik
52 pencils

Rahul,

The idea is great. Art direction could be better.

Try the same in colour. The hearts can be better designed.

Also you can play with the heart (made of flowers) used in weddings. That would be more hitting. Try it !

Karthik M.
> karthikm.gd@gmail.com

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