Advertisement

save environment

plz ignore grammatical mistakes!

Desi's picture
Desi
Activity Score 1052

Good.

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
Activity Score 3647

Trees preserve life preserve trees preserve life?

Trees preserve. Life preserve. Trees preserve life.
Is that an A+B, B+C, A=C?

Or ist it:
Trees preserve life.
Life preserve trees.
Trees preserve life.

Or maybe a treatment could be:
TREES PRESERVE LIFE. Preserve trees. Preserve life.

Nicely art Directed, but what the hell are you advertising? Also, you could set this in a green or brown to insinuate nature a bit more. Excellent look, just make sure the thought can back it up. The line is much stronger than the idea unless I am missing something.
--
brandon

stsanto's picture
stsanto
Activity Score 672

i guess it's continous... trees preserve life,.. so life preserves trees... and looping from this point. The message is clear, preserve trees if you want to preserve your life.

ivan's picture
ivan

Trees are part of life, so they are not preserving it they ARE life. The visual is interesting though.

Ainadaliel's picture
Ainadaliel
Activity Score 271

Nice idea but it needs to be crafted more.

Although the situation in the ad would best fit the Philippines, what with the many floods during rainy season because of illegal logging! LOL!

norgaz's picture
norgaz
Activity Score 4

suppeerrrr....:)

Svansvan's picture
Svansvan
Activity Score 2

The message is too common. What's creative idea?

klaussnow's picture
klaussnow
Activity Score 1675

I actually like that line weaving in and out, the visual should mimic that in some way.

... its already been done...

Aref's picture
Aref
Activity Score 152

the Ad is simple and clear.....i am ok with svansvan comment

Advertisement