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Renjini eye care

An unprofessional
practitioner may change
your world to severe dark.

Conceptual-eye's picture
Conceptual-eye
Activity Score 99

Don't like the 1st man, about 02 it works, but nothing outstanding i guess.

You've got a double space typo, check it out.

Good luck!

binunk's picture
binunk
Activity Score 216

thank u

whitespace's picture
whitespace
Activity Score 1953

'severe dark'?

double space typo, text kerning and spacing in the words below the logo are all off.

message overall is nothing new either. the direction of persuasion is fear, but it's not strong.

give it more thought before execution.

whitespace's picture
whitespace
Activity Score 1953

'severe dark'?

double space typo, text kerning and spacing in the words below the logo are all off.

message overall is nothing new either. the direction of persuasion is fear, but it's not strong.

give it more thought before execution.

daprankster's picture
daprankster
Activity Score 422

if i see it many times, i can have the feeling that it says(look we are professional) + using a sorte of fear i don't know if it's the best way, when you say (come ti ranjini eye care for better care) it's like you say (we repare what unpro practicians donebefore, we are specialized on reparation after bad cares)

binunk's picture
binunk
Activity Score 216

thanks

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