"Anyone can get HIV condoms? Please, seperate your message from the rest of the sentence. Other than that, this is no more than an informative leaflet, not much creative thinking.
Wait, I'm gonna keep the lines above even though I think I got something that I didn't see earlier just so you know what goes through someones mind when they read this. Are you trying to say "Anyone can get HIV (crossed out) Condoms", as in "Anyone can get condoms"? If so, I didn't get that. If this is the case, I still keep my leaflet opinion listed above.
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Not very creative.
"Anyone can get HIV condoms? Please, seperate your message from the rest of the sentence. Other than that, this is no more than an informative leaflet, not much creative thinking.
Wait, I'm gonna keep the lines above even though I think I got something that I didn't see earlier just so you know what goes through someones mind when they read this. Are you trying to say "Anyone can get HIV (crossed out) Condoms", as in "Anyone can get condoms"? If so, I didn't get that. If this is the case, I still keep my leaflet opinion listed above.
To me the headline is confusing. The strikethrough seems like typography.
no creative and clear enuff 4it's target market. it luks more lyk a leaflet than an ad or anything.
it's something i'd find @the library's notice board.
u culd've xplored more with the scratched hiv...try it & u'll c..use different mediums!