Post-it - Remeber




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Post-it - Remeber

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I see your idea and I like it but without "Post-it" I wouldn't be sure what type of product you want to show.

eugenius's picture

It's similar to Davosk memory stick post-it execution... anyway the visual didn't show the "remember" but only using post it to form a birthday cake. dont dig it.

i like it. but could be nicer if you form your visuals out of different real post-i sizes. (unlike the 'candle') try to make some more

those are real post it sizes, they make a slim page marker like the one in the ad.

oh, didn't know that. Ok, then! :)

Oh, and i agree with stsanto. kill the line

This is good. However the line "birthday", I think shouldn't be there. Just a word "remember" beside the Post-it logo would explain everything. An dmaybe should put the line and the logo at bottom corner instead of center-alligned.
Another idea you might want to try is to have the real Post-it notes on wall, or bedside, and take photo.

ivan's picture

Very cute.

Davosk's picture

Is cute, I would get rid of all type, it's doubley (is that a word?) repetitive. Also the background is too muddy and heavy which fights for irrelevant attention. A single page would surfice.

thnks guys... for all ur comments will improve

I liked this. Not ground breaking yet very enjoyable :)

its simply and superb

If only you have a flame over the candle note, then kill the birthday text, I am sure lot of people won't get it outright looking at the picture.
Otherwise it does justice.
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Short and Sweet... Sharing your Cake with me?

this will be remembered
nice

Vincent Robleto's picture

lovely. it took me a second to get there, but I think it's effective.
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