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Planned Parenthood

this is the last time i post this client .....i promise.

RobMc's picture
RobMc
Activity Score 243

i know about the spelling on number 3 im trying to find the correct word.

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RobMc
Activity Score 243

are these better than the last round?

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ivan

I can't make the connection between the headline, the image and the product.

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RobMc
Activity Score 243

still too layered and not simple enough......ok thanks ivan.

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• ω •
Activity Score 243

Hmm, what exactly is ur ad saying? I guess i get that phood is trying to convince the TA of safer sex and importance of life choices in 3 different ways. However it seems there r too many things to link up without a firm statement to round it off. So maybe a good tagling mite help to connect things up or perhaps look deep just into one solid thing phood wanna represent and work on that thought.

hope that helps :) bon courage!

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