Because it's a short can, you don't need to use the long end of the straw. He's suggesting you flip the straw around and insert the short bendable end of the straw into the can. This is really subtle. I'm surprised I got it. I like the clean layout but it might read faster if you show someone using the straw. You don't need to show the entire face. Barely get the mouth on the page. It will then be obvious that the straw is backwards. But let's see if most people get it before you consider making changes.
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I don't get it, are you trying to show that it's a small can compared to a real straw?
Because it's a short can, you don't need to use the long end of the straw. He's suggesting you flip the straw around and insert the short bendable end of the straw into the can. This is really subtle. I'm surprised I got it. I like the clean layout but it might read faster if you show someone using the straw. You don't need to show the entire face. Barely get the mouth on the page. It will then be obvious that the straw is backwards. But let's see if most people get it before you consider making changes.
I get it now, it didn't register that the short end was to go into the can. It is subtle and a clean layout, now I like it but what is yeni?
Sorry I didn't get it, maybe lipstick around the long end would help
Very nice, kloomsch. But as Stigset said, try lipstick around the long end!
Congrats. It's a good idea. It works. And what's "yeni" again?
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"yeni" means new in Turkish. I like the idea, it's simple and clever.
I think it's perfect. No lipstick needed. Makes you think. Great idea man.
I agree, whatever you do, do not put lipstick on it. People will get it.
It's cool.
I LOVE IT!!!! excellent execution and nice resource.
i get it without lipstick, but u can try, nice idea congrats!
Yes - i'm with these who prefer no lipstick. Very nice.
This is a very late comment but I love this one. :P
very good :)
Very nice. Can someone tell me how to get such clean gradients?
You mean the background gradient of this ad? I think he used Illustrator's mesh tool. But I could be wrong. It has the same effect though.
that's. Fucking. Awesome.
Insight everywhere. I could never wrap my head around paying full price for half as much product. Kudos on getting around that :)
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