parodontax: toothbrush & tooth

dont look at the execution. visual is not the best :)
any comments to the ideas?

1st: instead of brush there are many little blood collecting flasks.

parodontax: toothbrush & tooth
parodontax: toothbrush & tooth

3 comments

Davosk's picture
Davosk
4833 pencils

Not working like this. Maybe if you had nails or wire bristles this would be a more direct image to illustrate your problem of bleeding gums. Personally, I don't like headlines being a question. It would be better to say... 'for bleeding gums' - packshot.

Wordnerd's picture
Wordnerd
6662 pencils

i think the first one is too forced. guess it started as logic and lifted off to orbit in the creative process. the second one is a little too disgusting for my taste, sorry

izzlah's picture
izzlah
227 pencils

thanx. any other thoughts?

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