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the punch line doesnt support the visual....and visual doesnt go with the brand ....
think more with the same line and make good execution
need to work more on it
idea is very force-on
Not very inviting.
Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW
wat i can do to make it better & interesting. any suggestions?
Very good idea. Love the line as well. I think you could be more daring though. Guy with a toilet roll. But I think the 'BALTI' makes it more original. Maybe you could show guys sitting on chairs in office/real life situation like they sit on a potty?
I am not commenting on art as I think you only want to share the idea.
i m gonaa shoot some images like lady arguing with a bhajiwala, in the crowded market carrying 'balti',
guys playing cricket non striker carrying 'balti' in 'rush' to take a run.
idea is good.
need good execution.
what is balti ?
hey guys can i ask one thing how to send ads in the sandeepmakam.com. i hope u explain me thanks
wrong place to ask question.
go to other thread, try the dungeon.
tum kaha ho prabhu
not bad goood work could have been better plz coment on my work of income tax campaign
Instead of the bucket, use a plastic mug. The thought is fine but the line needs a better crafting. It's a vivid image and i think it works.