nityam churn

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nityam churn
nityam churn
nityam churn

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saalim's picture
saalim
51 pencils

bad idea....
the punch line doesnt support the visual....and visual doesnt go with the brand ....
think more with the same line and make good execution
need to work more on it

o.m's picture
o.m
354 pencils

terrible art.
idea is very force-on

ivan's picture
ivan

Not very inviting.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

restlesssoul.rahul's picture
restlesssoul.rahul
22 pencils

wat i can do to make it better & interesting. any suggestions?

Desi's picture
Desi
1052 pencils

Very good idea. Love the line as well. I think you could be more daring though. Guy with a toilet roll. But I think the 'BALTI' makes it more original. Maybe you could show guys sitting on chairs in office/real life situation like they sit on a potty?

I am not commenting on art as I think you only want to share the idea.

restlesssoul.rahul's picture
restlesssoul.rahul
22 pencils

thanx desi!
i m gonaa shoot some images like lady arguing with a bhajiwala, in the crowded market carrying 'balti',
guys playing cricket non striker carrying 'balti' in 'rush' to take a run.

Mahmood_Alam's picture
Mahmood_Alam
391 pencils

idea is good.
need good execution.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

what is balti ?

gyaan's picture
gyaan
64 pencils

idea is good.
need good execution.

hey guys can i ask one thing how to send ads in the sandeepmakam.com. i hope u explain me thanks

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

wrong place to ask question.
go to other thread, try the dungeon.

ivan's picture
ivan

correct

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

gyaan's picture
gyaan
64 pencils

ok! sorry

second_creator's picture
second_creator
754 pencils

tum kaha ho prabhu

copywriter

second_creator's picture
second_creator
754 pencils

tum kaha ho prabhu

copywriter

second_creator's picture
second_creator
754 pencils

tum kaha ho prabhu

copywriter

Abbasi's picture
Abbasi
45 pencils

not bad goood work could have been better plz coment on my work of income tax campaign

in-of-the-box's picture
in-of-the-box
15 pencils

Instead of the bucket, use a plastic mug. The thought is fine but the line needs a better crafting. It's a vivid image and i think it works.

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