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saalim's picture
saalim
Activity Score 51

bad idea....
the punch line doesnt support the visual....and visual doesnt go with the brand ....
think more with the same line and make good execution
need to work more on it

o.m's picture
o.m
Activity Score 354

terrible art.
idea is very force-on

ivan's picture
ivan

Not very inviting.

restlesssoul.rahul's picture
restlesssoul.rahul
Activity Score 22

wat i can do to make it better & interesting. any suggestions?

Desi's picture
Desi
Activity Score 1052

Very good idea. Love the line as well. I think you could be more daring though. Guy with a toilet roll. But I think the 'BALTI' makes it more original. Maybe you could show guys sitting on chairs in office/real life situation like they sit on a potty?

I am not commenting on art as I think you only want to share the idea.

restlesssoul.rahul's picture
restlesssoul.rahul
Activity Score 22

thanx desi!
i m gonaa shoot some images like lady arguing with a bhajiwala, in the crowded market carrying 'balti',
guys playing cricket non striker carrying 'balti' in 'rush' to take a run.

Mahmood_Alam's picture
Mahmood_Alam
Activity Score 391

idea is good.
need good execution.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
Activity Score 672

what is balti ?

gyaan's picture
gyaan
Activity Score 64

idea is good.
need good execution.

hey guys can i ask one thing how to send ads in the sandeepmakam.com. i hope u explain me thanks

stsanto's picture
stsanto
Activity Score 672

wrong place to ask question.
go to other thread, try the dungeon.

ivan's picture
ivan

correct

gyaan's picture
gyaan
Activity Score 64

ok! sorry

second_creator's picture
second_creator
Activity Score 754

tum kaha ho prabhu

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second_creator's picture
second_creator
Activity Score 754

tum kaha ho prabhu

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second_creator's picture
second_creator
Activity Score 754

tum kaha ho prabhu

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Abbasi's picture
Abbasi
Activity Score 45

not bad goood work could have been better plz coment on my work of income tax campaign

in-of-the-box's picture
in-of-the-box
Activity Score 15

Instead of the bucket, use a plastic mug. The thought is fine but the line needs a better crafting. It's a vivid image and i think it works.

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