news paper ad ( guys need your feedback

hmm...well, if it is the most happening place for educucation, you can't say it is. you've got to show it. it's like walking around saying you're cool, because then you're automatically uncool. stupid society rules. Plus, the AD isn't very compelling it's just confusing, you've got some fight club, with some rough type. it just feels old & trendy. the programs you're advertising are heavy into design & creativity, but the "ad" just feels old. I apologize for being harsh, but the only way we get better is by hearing what people don't like about our work, not what they like.