NEW BIG EAT - EVERYONE MISSED IDEA DUE TO MY POOR A.D. - CAN YOU SEE IT NOW??

NEW BIG EAT - EVERYONE MISSED IDEA DUE TO MY POOR A.D. - CAN YOU SEE IT NOW??

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brandsurgeon's picture
brandsurgeon
693 pencils

That was quick dude. Now i can see it's a button. Are you using stock photography or are you shooting thing this live? maybe you should try showing a bit of the big belly from a first person camera view. just my opinion, dude.

Cool runnings.

BrandSurgeon

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Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

Yep this is stock footage. I'm gonna shoot it three different ways for a campaign if people think it's a good idea. I also thought about just showing the shirt with misssing buttons?? Cheers

brandsurgeon's picture
brandsurgeon
693 pencils

Well, y'know, one thing we try to avoid is a "see-all-tell-all" thing. Let the mind of the conumer or prospect wander a bit. That's why I was suggesting first person cam P.O.V. And stop saying your ad is poor. You've got direction... you just need to crack the perfect execution, k?

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brandsurgeon's picture
brandsurgeon
693 pencils

Unless you want to show the shirt with the missing buttons without having to show the plate or anything like that. Then, you'd have a point. my worry is how you'd draw out a campaign from this.

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Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

Yes just showing the item of damaged clothing each time (1) missing button shirt (2) Belt with stretched holes (3) split pant

or can I make a campaign by always showing a button or two in the shot with a different table/plate/bowl set ups?? cheers

brandsurgeon's picture
brandsurgeon
693 pencils

I prefer the first option. More variety. ask around for a second opinion and fire away!

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Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

Sorry which was first?? Do you mean 1st in the above comment or the original idea with the plate? Thanks a lot for the help!

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

Anyone Else? Cheers

brandsurgeon's picture
brandsurgeon
693 pencils

I mean the first series in the above statement with the buttons, the belt et al. i think they possess humorous qualities.

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Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

I think the best solution is the shirt missing a button, and the belt.
That could be fun.
Good luck

aj_stone1981's picture
aj_stone1981
482 pencils

Doesn't do it for me. Think more about your ads and how they can work as campaigns. Don't just rush an ad to get it out there so that people can see it, take your time and get it right first.

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