national geographic

national geographic

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like.a.boy
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The idea is too straight forward.
Too many things going on here, you need more work on the typography, tighten the artwork a little, cos it's rather loose here and there. And I've a problem with the photo, we tend to be directed to what people are looking at, the head brings me away from your message.

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