Moods Condoms




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Advertised brand: Moods Condoms
Advert title(s):Moods Condoms
Creative Director:Amit Nimbalkar
Art Director:Amit Nimbalkar
Copywriter:Amit Nimbalkar
Illustrator:Amit Nimbalkar
Photographer:Amit Nimbalkar



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loader's picture

ugh..looks more like rash

the line doesn't go with the picture

no benefit exposed, what dots?

And herpes give you dots.

nice start man, (coz u r not from the advertising background) but let me tell u what u r trying to show hsn't really come out through ur ad. keep posting threads and ideas regularly, one day u will become an expert.
all the best.

your work is your identity.
http://harshikcreations.blogspot.com/

Davosk's picture

Creative Director:Amit Nimbalkar
Art Director:Amit Nimbalkar
Copywriter:Amit Nimbalkar
Illustrator:Amit Nimbalkar
Photographer:Amit Nimbalkar

Who are you kidding?

good but i agree with harshik suraiya.

always think for good.

wearmysocks's picture

Keep trying. Don't evolve this concept. Just get a new one.

You need to show something with dots that gives you pleasure not a 'Karela' that doesnt look pleasureabe enough. Just a bad example: You could show those 'accupunture flip flops' that has dots and gives you pleasure. I know you are looking for someting that is long and suggestive...

Dalbir
www.AdOfDaMonth.com

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