monster spec ad




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a spec ad for monster.com. pls comment.

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Not bad, man. There's an idea there...could be executed better with more of a real photo feel (or simply a real photo).

I'm not sure how i feel about the informal phonetics: "wanna"....why not "want to"? When most people read, they kind of 'slur over' the words anyway...let them do the inflection, not you.

I wonder though....how would you expand on this ad? Are there other contexts with that tagline?

Yeah massively campaignable. Thrash it to death. There are better executions.

nice

Thank you buddies for your valuable comments. As for the execution part, it's just a spec work and i can't afford a real photo...my art partner finished it in 20 minutes flat. And yes, it's campaignable for sure. I admit using 'wanna' instead of 'want to' is a mistake, since this ad is for monster.com/india.

Nice thought. Since this is for Mosnter India why don't you make it more Bollywoodish and india specific occupations.

Example: Bootpolishwala - Raj Srivastav
Rikshawala - Tony Gupta
Dhobhi - Ramesh

Find the professions that could make it funny. Agreed with SOnOfA about the copy...

Desi
www.DesiCreative.com

Its a very good idea, but the execution is poor

hehe...very good...Art Direction is needed

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