Monster jobs ad

Please give me critique!

beautifulads's picture
Activity Score 43

very nice. horrible visual. horrible layout. But yeah, the idea shows that they spend too long at work. well done. now for crits just scamp it in black pen. even trace it.

Chris's picture
Activity Score 1985

exactly, a rough black pen layout is alot better becasue it leaves the visual elements up to creatives mind, and because most of the time u show ur work to a cd, they usually have a very creative mind, if u present a good idea done in a bad photoshopped hack job, it doesnt come across as strong, and 9 times out of ten they will slag you for the art direction.
my opinion any way. anybody agree?

scrabbler's picture
Activity Score 15

sorry...i m a student and into copywriting. so just in the process of learning art direction.
thanks for the comment. pls keep giving me feedback.

ivan's picture

idea is great. congrats.