...comments please!

swat's picture
Activity Score 355

like the idea. You could execute a little better. Change the font size here and there....for example the hedline..."Zaara waited for 14 years" should be very strongly seen. That effect isn't coming.

ivan's picture

The idea is weak in my opinion. Maybe look for a different angle.

priyanka_sabnis's picture
Activity Score 228

indian weddings are highly influenced by bollywood films (eg. the clothes bride wears, the decorations and to some extent even the rituals) and none of the matrimony sites have taken this thought seriously. Hence these ads are just a connect between bollywood and marriages.

As swat says i might have to work on the design part.

thanks anyways.

drunkard's picture
Activity Score 113

Ivan!... I liked these advts.... May be u r not familiar with India's fascination with Bollywood. Though I think art can be improved..

Mahmood_Alam's picture
Activity Score 391

achha hai priyanka!!!
nice one

Kamikaze's picture
Activity Score 716

Hmmm... well the idea is not really that great, but if u wanna think strategy it might as well work... Not bad... atleast there is enough clarity, compared to the 'AXE' debacle priyanka... Good to see u progressing... But again, Think... Think... Think... There should be a better idea. may be somewhere in this one...


- The trick to forgetting the big picture is to look at everything close-up.

priyanka_sabnis's picture
Activity Score 228

thanks everyone. after explaination people seem to understand the thought better.

Conceptual-eye's picture
Activity Score 99

I agree. It's a good idea, the art's not great but could be improved.

Good Luck!

himanshu prabhakar's picture
himanshu prabhakar
Activity Score 471

Realllllllllly good for indian Shaadi.

Himanshu Prabhakar

priyanka_sabnis's picture
Activity Score 228

dude it is almost a year and half old ad...feels weird to see you complementing it. anyways thanks for taking pains to dig it out.

scorpio20's picture
Activity Score 30

No priyanka, i cant compare this with your save tree ad. that was so nice, if you want to communicate matrimony through bollywood it can be the picture of old Zara (should feel like still waiting) kinda approch. This is jst my opinion. Thanks.

priyanka_sabnis's picture
Activity Score 228

i do agree with scorpio20. layout is not my cup of tea anyways. this was done just to communicate the idea. n please dont compare one ad to the another. this was done years ago. anyways thanks for commenting!'s picture
Activity Score 89

idea is great !!! .... but need to improve on design part.

vishnu1's picture
Activity Score 53

good idea but too pop-culturish, In India marriage is supposed to be divine and not some kind of fashionable lifestyle choice and the ad is portraying exactly that, Sigh ! Good Idea bad transformation !

raju's picture
Activity Score 63

good as a whole only thing is that is u need a good art partner!

angieraj's picture
Activity Score 428

The message is great. Its funny, engages the audience and relates beautifully with the product (Online Matrimony site, this faster and convenient). Good work!

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