Matrimony

...comments please!

Matrimony
Matrimony
Matrimony

16 comments

swat's picture
swat
357 pencils

like the idea. You could execute a little better. Change the font size here and there....for example the hedline..."Zaara waited for 14 years" should be very strongly seen. That effect isn't coming.

ivan's picture
ivan

The idea is weak in my opinion. Maybe look for a different angle.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

priyanka_sabnis's picture
priyanka_sabnis
228 pencils

indian weddings are highly influenced by bollywood films (eg. the clothes bride wears, the decorations and to some extent even the rituals) and none of the matrimony sites have taken this thought seriously. Hence these ads are just a connect between bollywood and marriages.

As swat says i might have to work on the design part.

thanks anyways.

drunkard's picture
drunkard
113 pencils

Ivan!... I liked these advts.... May be u r not familiar with India's fascination with Bollywood. Though I think art can be improved..

Mahmood_Alam's picture
Mahmood_Alam
391 pencils

achha hai priyanka!!!
nice one

Kamikaze's picture
Kamikaze
716 pencils

Hmmm... well the idea is not really that great, but if u wanna think strategy it might as well work... Not bad... atleast there is enough clarity, compared to the 'AXE' debacle priyanka... Good to see u progressing... But again, Think... Think... Think... There should be a better idea. may be somewhere in this one...

Cheers!!!

- The trick to forgetting the big picture is to look at everything close-up.

priyanka_sabnis's picture
priyanka_sabnis
228 pencils

thanks everyone. after explaination people seem to understand the thought better.

Conceptual-eye's picture
Conceptual-eye
99 pencils

I agree. It's a good idea, the art's not great but could be improved.

Good Luck!

himanshu prabhakar's picture
himanshu prabhakar
471 pencils

Realllllllllly good for indian Shaadi.

Himanshu Prabhakar

priyanka_sabnis's picture
priyanka_sabnis
228 pencils

dude it is almost a year and half old ad...feels weird to see you complementing it. anyways thanks for taking pains to dig it out.

scorpio20's picture
scorpio20
30 pencils

No priyanka, i cant compare this with your save tree ad. that was so nice, if you want to communicate matrimony through bollywood it can be the picture of old Zara (should feel like still waiting) kinda approch. This is jst my opinion. Thanks.

priyanka_sabnis's picture
priyanka_sabnis
228 pencils

i do agree with scorpio20. layout is not my cup of tea anyways. this was done just to communicate the idea. n please dont compare one ad to the another. this was done years ago. anyways thanks for commenting!

purplesohail@gmail.com's picture
purplesohail@gm...
89 pencils

idea is great !!! .... but need to improve on design part.

vishnu1's picture
vishnu1
53 pencils

good idea but too pop-culturish, In India marriage is supposed to be divine and not some kind of fashionable lifestyle choice and the ad is portraying exactly that, Sigh ! Good Idea bad transformation !

raju's picture
raju
63 pencils

good as a whole only thing is that is u need a good art partner!

angieraj's picture
angieraj
428 pencils

The message is great. Its funny, engages the audience and relates beautifully with the product (Online Matrimony site, this faster and convenient). Good work!

Cognito Ergo Sum

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