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maglite car
Submitted by lexter17 on Fri, 2008-09-05 08:37.
student work. so please, be nice with your critiques. thank you.
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It's so bright it can replace your car's headlights- decent benefit (although illegal :D)
It works for me. Could use a line but I get it without.
Nice rough skills. My only problem with this is that it lacks a bit of "wow !" effect. it's not exagerated enough.
Appart from that I guess it works.
Personally, I'm kind sick of the gross over exaggeration. I like that you resisted the urge to go that direction.
Nice idea. Clean, simple, easy to understand. Really good idea.
Keep going, see if you can campaign it...you might find you come up with a much better ad altogether.
If you kill my demons, my angels might die too.
Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but I've seen this direction before. I'll try to look for it, but from what I can remember it was exactly the same, maybe from a different angle.
I don't believe you stole the idea or have even seen the one I'm talking about at all, so if you could come up with this, don't worry because you're on the right track. Keep thinking and I bet you'll come up with an even better idea/ execution for this!
Apart from that I agree with nicoB "Nice rough skills".... Unless this was your final execution...
hmm, where can i check whether ideas have been done before? i only know this site and coloribus.com...
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