Lonely Planet

i'm an aspiring art-guy, who's tried his hand at copy in this piece.
looking for feed back and comments.

Lonely Planet


Besha's picture
295 pencils

beautiful art. I really like the art direction :)

chintan ruparel's picture
chintan ruparel
1516 pencils

wow...! this is quite amazing! i havnt seen student art like this since long...

~ old habits die hard, older ones never do ~

Stigset's picture
1454 pencils

really cool drawing !! love it (just need a tad bit of retouching)

weighter's picture
744 pencils

I may be missing something but what does this art direction have to do with the message? Style is never really superfluous i guess, but when it comes to copy treatment, then unless theres a correlation to its message then it is almost always detrimental.

Its artistic, but it's like aspiring writers tackling comedic prose, use it appropriately and use it well.

Minimum's picture
1490 pencils

indeed, now its just 'eye-candy'

...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

binunk's picture
216 pencils

very nice

ivan's picture

Nice art, but agree with weighter.

o.m's picture
354 pencils

hi, thanks everyone.
u got a point there weighter,
but its jus another way of doing it.
i could've very well manipulated photographs and
placed the copy in a decent font but i chose this form of execution
to the former because;

1.its more interesting/attractive and fun
2.departs from a conventional cheeky tourism ad

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