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Limited Color Eye Care Ad
Submitted by arthropodbunnies on Tue, 2007-10-30 14:21.
I'm going to start posting some of my work for critique at this site. Wouldn't hurt to have a few suggestions.
I feel like the concept in this ad is pretty unclear and weak. What do u guys think?
I tried blurring the cabinet to make it seem like it was hard to see, but I wasn't a big fan.
Suggestions, please!
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Yeah, this is not working as you suspected. If this was my house I would know if I was in the bathroom or the kitchen. Try to really hone in on the essence of what your talking about and maybe try to find a way to say it that isn't as expected.
Keep digging and kudos for asking for feedback, it will make your work stronger being open to new ways of exploring the concept
Try not. Do or do not. There is no try.
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