Submitted by wearmysocks on Tue, 2008-02-05 04:45.
I like the thought that you are out to answer age-old questions such as this one with the new Freelander. I also like the tagline. I don't think this image is connected to this concept though. Wouldn't you be better served with an image of the car in the process of trying to answer this question? Either by actually putting it in a forest, or in a forest driving towards a falling tree or something?
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Submitted by Advertainment on Fri, 2008-02-08 09:22.
Hmmm...
Frankly having seen so many different 4x4 ads and worked on them myself this doesn't do anything for someone who is going to buy this car.
OK you are working on the book so doesn't really matter, which most of the twats here never understand.
Anyway you really need to get into the freelander spirit and find a interesting strategy/thought
Submitted by Shaundannyboy on Fri, 2008-02-08 12:26.
S&D
advertainment, first of all twat? have a flick through what you have written and see if that applies to your self, very easy to criticise other people but your self? well thats another matter.
Submitted by wearmysocks on Fri, 2008-02-08 12:28.
Dude, he wasn't calling you a twat. Flick through what he has written and you'll see it doesn't apply to yourself.
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I like the thought that you are out to answer age-old questions such as this one with the new Freelander. I also like the tagline. I don't think this image is connected to this concept though. Wouldn't you be better served with an image of the car in the process of trying to answer this question? Either by actually putting it in a forest, or in a forest driving towards a falling tree or something?
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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.
Hmmm...
Frankly having seen so many different 4x4 ads and worked on them myself this doesn't do anything for someone who is going to buy this car.
OK you are working on the book so doesn't really matter, which most of the twats here never understand.
Anyway you really need to get into the freelander spirit and find a interesting strategy/thought
Get back to work Mit!
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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.
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advertainment, first of all twat? have a flick through what you have written and see if that applies to your self, very easy to criticise other people but your self? well thats another matter.
Dude, he wasn't calling you a twat. Flick through what he has written and you'll see it doesn't apply to yourself.
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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.
when you win a few creative circles and D&AD pencil come back mate!!!
Silly headlines on freelander work haha!! that'll be the day!!
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dnad pencil how much was that?
Don't think you can ever afford it with that attitude mate!!
And why are you so defensive about your work?
If it's not good then it's not.
Welcome to advertising.
There is no concept here.
1 it doesn't appear to be in the "woods" which is a disconnect from your line
2 the line is trying to be aloof and heady. It just comes off as trite
You need ideas for your book not executions. This is an execution.
Advice - if you want it- is keep working.
Good is the enemy of great.
Out with incest dude, copy was used for taylor guitars done by vitro robertson..
Be original, use your own ideas..
YEE HAW ADVERTISING EGO WARS!!!!!
*Stands on high horse, pisses on all*
Watch it or I'll smack you with my New York Festivals...um...e-mail printoff...fuck it, it's in a heavy frame.
[EGO:10]
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Try a better line. "If a tree falls in the woods and no one's around, a Jeep driver would be screwed."
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