Labelle_Slimming Centre

Light. Lighter. Lightest.

Art: Etrouth Sudhakar
copy: Jeetu

Labelle_Slimming Centre

4 comments

rikitiki's picture
rikitiki
630 pencils

the idea is definitely there but...

i'm not seeing how your tagline corresponds to the visual. I only see two: "light" and "lighter". And actually, i don't see how the stone path relates to "light". maybe "heavy".
I don't like the "out" sign (is that "lightest"?). or is walking on water "lightest"?

I actually like the idea but it has to come through cleaner and clearer.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

he meant to show when you go there, you are not as light as when you come back.
anyway,... the leaves look fake, and I see some other leaves on the bottom of the pond?
I'm confused.

ivan's picture
ivan

The idea is good, but you need to get rid of everything that is not necessary to make the idea stand out.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

Nate_Davis's picture
Nate_Davis
22 pencils

The pond is new, but the in/out setup has been used so many times for gyms and health clubs.

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