Idea is there... but is this the only way to say "strong bonds"?? I have seen this visual in many-many ads... if you think it's fresh and haven't seen it before, then at least work on art and make it "look" fresh.... good luck!!
Submitted by twelve_noon on Thu, 2007-07-19 13:17.
why do you need "strong bonds"? It doesn't add anything. I think this is a pretty straightforward idea but the visual is like far away from serving the concept. Maybe it's the blurry photo, the background... Anyways it;s solid and you're a good thinker...
Submitted by knight2hunt on Mon, 2007-07-16 02:33.
the idea shows that u think, whc is good, but its still a first thought in the "glue ad for award" category, ur on the right track but i would want u to push urself harder for the bigger idea
as a student.. i think its a good idea..
but the visual is not goot..need fixed
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sorry for my terrible english..indonesian :)
Submitted by Fridgerator on Mon, 2007-07-16 19:17.
Thanks for all the comments! Seems like I'm getting on the right track thanks to all you guys commenting on my stuff. I will continue to work on fixes and new ideas. Thanks!
If it's students work, it doesnt help at all to use "it's already been done!" arguments to tell them its bad. Jeez almost everything has been done anywhere. And i think most times it wasn't the intention to steal it. tell them it has been done, but give a comment anyway. it was done, ok. But is it good? they are not learning that way
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Great Idea. Ugly ad. But I'm sure you'll fix that.
Idea is there... but is this the only way to say "strong bonds"?? I have seen this visual in many-many ads... if you think it's fresh and haven't seen it before, then at least work on art and make it "look" fresh.... good luck!!
I do agree the art needs lots of work, but I really dont know how.
I'd love to see the visual you've seen in the other ads, if you could post them.
Thanks for all the help! More comments will be appreciated.
why do you need "strong bonds"? It doesn't add anything. I think this is a pretty straightforward idea but the visual is like far away from serving the concept. Maybe it's the blurry photo, the background... Anyways it;s solid and you're a good thinker...
the idea shows that u think, whc is good, but its still a first thought in the "glue ad for award" category, ur on the right track but i would want u to push urself harder for the bigger idea
Two magnets are not that a strong bond if you think about it. It is pretty east to separate them.
Thats not the idea. Those are pushing each other away, but dont, because of the glue.
But I agree that "Instant" would be the better message here
ha ha ...
the idea is actually
POLES APART*
*pun intended.
and yes its been done by fevicol.
O&M, Bombay.
as a student.. i think its a good idea..
but the visual is not goot..need fixed
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sorry for my terrible english..indonesian :)
the same ... i repeat...exactly same idea was done for Fevicol Adhesive in India...
Cheers!
I didnt know, this idea just popped in my head and I decided to do it. I dont really have much of an ad viewing history so...
Thanks for the info!
"Repeat"
- scorpio20
Thanks for all the comments! Seems like I'm getting on the right track thanks to all you guys commenting on my stuff. I will continue to work on fixes and new ideas. Thanks!
If it's students work, it doesnt help at all to use "it's already been done!" arguments to tell them its bad. Jeez almost everything has been done anywhere. And i think most times it wasn't the intention to steal it. tell them it has been done, but give a comment anyway. it was done, ok. But is it good? they are not learning that way
I think you should take away "strong bonds". You don't need it as long as the visual is very clear. Unless you come up with a better line.
Im gonna remove the copy. How else can I improve upon this?