I think it's pretty clear except u gotta work a lot harder on the art my friend. It's gonna be a long night and he's gonna be jerking off surfing theporn site. Obvious, obvious he'll need a lot of Kleenex. Idea is ok. A lil more subtlety definitely needed.
it's gonna be a long day for you to make an ad.
this is horrible in every aspect.
idea / layout / the picture you chose
EVERYTHING is wrong with this ad.
do yourself a favour and delete this from the forum.
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Is this a joke?
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PLEASE EXPLAIN....I DIN GET THIS AD....N , Y DID U USE TWO TIMES THE TISSUE IN THIS AD.
I think it's pretty clear except u gotta work a lot harder on the art my friend. It's gonna be a long night and he's gonna be jerking off surfing theporn site. Obvious, obvious he'll need a lot of Kleenex. Idea is ok. A lil more subtlety definitely needed.
Let there be light!
What is stronger? Fuck or Yuck?
Theres something wrong with your brain.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO K.........HMMMM....THE GUY IS FRESH AND THE ENVIRONMENT LOOK LIKE AS IF IT IS MORNING.USUALL WE DON BE FRESH WHEN WE ARE HOT.
it's gonna be a long day for you to make an ad.
this is horrible in every aspect.
idea / layout / the picture you chose
EVERYTHING is wrong with this ad.
do yourself a favour and delete this from the forum.
- Here I should have written something smarter -
It's wank
yes this was a joke by the way...sorry to offend
dont do sex jokes, would you really show this to a creative director?