kelloggs corn flakes...... comments guys.


Submitted by Funky_Frogii on Fri, 2008-05-09 06:40.

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Submitted by izzlah on Fri, 2008-05-09 07:23.

the line "for smart kids" isn't very original. been done..

Submitted by Davosk on Fri, 2008-05-09 07:30.

If a kid is smart then it doesn't matter if they eats corn flakes or not. Should read 'Makes kids smart'.
Your layout is flat, messy and ugly. Also, I'm not good at math but this seems wrong.

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Submitted by Funky_Frogii on Mon, 2008-05-12 01:10.

changed it dude............thank you for your comment.

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Submitted by Funky_Frogii on Mon, 2008-05-12 01:10.

please comment guys .......

love anything creative.

Submitted by JAGGY on Mon, 2008-05-12 04:47.

"For smart kids" doesn't mean that this product is meant for kids who are already smart. Expose yourself to some more good advertising, Davosk. It implies, it makes them smart.

I like the idea. But execution wise, you need to do something to make it look more credible.

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Submitted by Funky_Frogii on Wed, 2008-05-14 23:29.

more comments.................please

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Submitted by Davosk on Thu, 2008-05-15 02:40.

Try and make it look more pleasing to the eye, at the moment it's all over the place. Look at the front page or ad books for some inspiration.

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Submitted by Funky_Frogii on Thu, 2008-05-15 03:17.

thank you dude....'ll see

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Submitted by Funky_Frogii on Fri, 2008-05-16 04:06.

comments guys....?

love anything creative.

Submitted by Olafski001 on Fri, 2008-05-16 05:33.

i like the math joke

but i don't like the insight. Makes kids smart? For smart kids
It's just a claim that goes for any product, there's no insight in your product or your consumer

if it was my book, i would drop it

- Here I should have written something smarter -