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ABISSNET GIRL - SHOP & GOSSIP with Abissnet Internet in your home
ABISSNET MAN - WORK & FUN with Abissnet Internet in your home
ABISSNET BOY - PLAY & LEARN with Abissnet Internet in your home

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26 comments

Olafski001's picture
Olafski001
1193 pencils

hahaha ivan the honour is yours...

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

Yeah true "you should have written something smarter" :)

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

ivan's picture
ivan

Haha, thanks for the honor, but I think there are much smarter people around here.

I like the light effect, but nothing else really. The layout is too complex. The message isn't insightful. Photos are a cliche. Sorry! :(

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

Thx for the comment. Anyone else??

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

Olafski001's picture
Olafski001
1193 pencils

i kinda agree with ivan, except for what he says on the light effect.
Smart enough, emati84?

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

Hey olafski001 you know that "silence" really suits you.

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

Righteousone's picture
Righteousone
781 pencils

just what we need, another aspiring graphic designer

bebe's picture
bebe
194 pencils

Calling this 'graphic design' is an insult to graphic designers. These are really ugly.

Yin's picture
Yin
91 pencils

emati84, if u dont like criticism, then 'invisible' really suits you...or if not u can try 'disappear' too....

mmackinven's picture
mmackinven
1564 pencils

*grabs popcorn*

munch munch!

Davosk's picture
Davosk
4833 pencils

There is still room in these for some 14pt body copy. C'mon fill up that ugly white space.

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

Listen here guys, this is an ad, not an artwork ok?
This is intended to inform people here in Albania (if u know where Albania is).
So try to understand it as an "advertising" not painting.
Thx.

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

rebelscum's picture
rebelscum
2114 pencils

Wow you're one of those self-righteous cocktards aren't ya?

"Listen here guys, this is an ad, not an artwork ok?"

Well you're wrong about the ad part, but you're dead on nuts accurate about the art.

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"I saw a subliminal ad executive once, but only for a second." - The Wright
www.ryanfox.ca

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I have thousands of pencils and $1.50 so I'm off to Starbucks

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

About the comments, I really appreciate that you guys spend your time commenting on my work but if u dont have somthind smart to say than maybe "silence" may suite u. As I said before "Thx for the comment. Anyone else??"

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

danyels0n's picture
danyels0n
204 pencils

Would you look at it for more than two seconds?

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

Well I think that there's more to look here.
"Thx for the comment. Anyone else??" :)

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

Righteousone's picture
Righteousone
781 pencils

i don't see an idea.

pretty good's picture
pretty good
364 pencils

There is no idea here and it's all ugly.

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

The idea:

GIRL:
HEADLINE: SHOP & GOSSIP
DESIGN: From one side the usual stuff a girl can buy on the internet AND on the otherside The Gossip stuff like Magazines different photos of VIP.
And all of these divided in two "worlds" from that "ugly" light effect.

At least there is an idea there. Right?

"Thx for the comment. Anyone else??" :)

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

danyels0n's picture
danyels0n
204 pencils

GIRL:

OK - Your idea is to show how this girl gets both worlds out of this service or product.

HEADLINE : SHOP & GOSSIP with Abissnet Internet in your home. - Boring.

IMAGE : Girl smiling with both worlds around her. - Boring

Throw in a bunch of other crap like prices, and images of shit she can buy- and you've got this ad.

SO - At this moment I see your idea, but it's not on this ad.

fala fulani's picture
fala fulani
254 pencils

Still no idea. If as you say the main thing is to communicate then let the message flow. There are elements everywhere that distract the audience. The font is also quite bad for the product.

picktokyo's picture
picktokyo
1404 pencils

emati84 dude, I see it as an ad ok? and this... is nothing special. it is too complex, and no idea there, this is just like a phone card ad I saw in Indian street shop. Need to learn much more

Dalbir Singh's picture
Dalbir Singh
557 pencils

Only commenting on your design-

Photography not so bad, actually quite passable.
You should clean up the copy, remove the 3D effect, the shadow and the skew effect.
The glow doesn't really work well, so you may need to find another way to show the two sides. Illustration is not so bad either.
Have some clean space around the logo, and do something with the price.

Find a more cleaner look, look at all those telecom ads. Telenor, Orange, Vodaphone etc...

Dalbir
www.AdOfDaMonth.com

Eri M's picture
Eri M
80 pencils

Thanks to all of you. Cheers

Name: Erind Mati
Ocupation: Graphic Designer
Agency: Spot JWT Albania

ernest.cisse's picture
ernest.cisse
2 pencils

do you people like your job?
Always telling shits one another.
That's shameful

troydananjaya's picture
troydananjaya
4 pencils

respect others reflecting respect your self

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