instant relief

hope it doesn't need an explanation.

instant relief

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funky_frogii
2536 pencils

please explain ........din get it.whats the product?

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loader's picture
loader
1141 pencils

it's mineral water with laxative effect (commonly known in my country)

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Davosk
4825 pencils

A mineral water that gives you the runs, not a good benefit from where I'm sitting.

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Banner2k5
551 pencils

typographically i love it. didnt know about the product but having looked at loaders comment, i love this. simple and concise. very nice

packshot however. UGLY!
wayyyyyyy tooo BIG
as is the strap, id also consider reworking that.

if im gna nitpick mebbe a h rather than than ellipses, but thats just a thought probably better as it is.

askon's picture
askon
433 pencils

I didn't get the idea off the bat, I think by showing the A change gradually defeats the idea of "Instant relief". Needs work IMHO

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rebelscum
2114 pencils

A W E S O M E

My only beef: Should be AHHHHHH. Otherwise...awesome.

EDIT: The idea is brilliant. Needs an AD's touch, for sure.
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Banner2k5's picture
Banner2k5
551 pencils

surely it needs more than one A.

loader's picture
loader
1141 pencils

damn...thanks.

ajit_hsahu's picture
ajit_hsahu
83 pencils

good thought bit jut A is not relevant, needs more. AHHHH good suggestion

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