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hope it doesn't need an explanation.
please explain ........din get it.whats the product?
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it's mineral water with laxative effect (commonly known in my country)
A mineral water that gives you the runs, not a good benefit from where I'm sitting.
typographically i love it. didnt know about the product but having looked at loaders comment, i love this. simple and concise. very nice
packshot however. UGLY!
wayyyyyyy tooo BIG
as is the strap, id also consider reworking that.
if im gna nitpick mebbe a h rather than than ellipses, but thats just a thought probably better as it is.
I didn't get the idea off the bat, I think by showing the A change gradually defeats the idea of "Instant relief". Needs work IMHO
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My only beef: Should be AHHHHHH. Otherwise...awesome.
EDIT: The idea is brilliant. Needs an AD's touch, for sure.
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I have thousands of pencils and $1.50 so I'm off to Starbucks
surely it needs more than one A.
good thought bit jut A is not relevant, needs more. AHHHH good suggestion