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hope it doesn't need an explanation.
please explain ........din get it.whats the product?
love anything creative http://addot.blogspot.com/
it's mineral water with laxative effect (commonly known in my country)
A mineral water that gives you the runs, not a good benefit from where I'm sitting.
typographically i love it. didnt know about the product but having looked at loaders comment, i love this. simple and concise. very nice
packshot however. UGLY! wayyyyyyy tooo BIG as is the strap, id also consider reworking that.
if im gna nitpick mebbe a h rather than than ellipses, but thats just a thought probably better as it is.
www.bahonsadvertising.co.uk
I didn't get the idea off the bat, I think by showing the A change gradually defeats the idea of "Instant relief". Needs work IMHO
A W E S O M E
My only beef: Should be AHHHHHH. Otherwise...awesome.
EDIT: The idea is brilliant. Needs an AD's touch, for sure. ____________________________________________________________
"I saw a subliminal ad executive once, but only for a second." - The Wright www.ryanfox.ca
surely it needs more than one A.
damn...thanks.
good thought bit jut A is not relevant, needs more. AHHHH good suggestion
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please explain ........din get it.whats the product?
love anything creative
http://addot.blogspot.com/
it's mineral water with laxative effect (commonly known in my country)
A mineral water that gives you the runs, not a good benefit from where I'm sitting.
typographically i love it. didnt know about the product but having looked at loaders comment, i love this. simple and concise. very nice
packshot however. UGLY!
wayyyyyyy tooo BIG
as is the strap, id also consider reworking that.
if im gna nitpick mebbe a h rather than than ellipses, but thats just a thought probably better as it is.
www.bahonsadvertising.co.uk
I didn't get the idea off the bat, I think by showing the A change gradually defeats the idea of "Instant relief". Needs work IMHO
A W E S O M E
My only beef: Should be AHHHHHH. Otherwise...awesome.
EDIT: The idea is brilliant. Needs an AD's touch, for sure.
____________________________________________________________
"I saw a subliminal ad executive once, but only for a second." - The Wright
www.ryanfox.ca
surely it needs more than one A.
www.bahonsadvertising.co.uk
damn...thanks.
good thought bit jut A is not relevant, needs more. AHHHH good suggestion
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