This must be something only Indians get. All I see is a very clumsy way to illustrate whiteness. Absolutely no relation to white teeth, if that's what you're trying to do. Don't go showing this to any CDs.
What's your problem? I can mention any country I like.
I only implied that it was maybe something appreciated by a local audience, ie: India.
Don't get shirty with me if you have an inferiority complex. You're implying that I'm making a comment based on race?
You are mistaken and need to look at what you write before opening your mouth.
I love cricket and admire your country and its people. You however, I take exception.
Submitted by capton john on Thu, 2008-07-24 00:53.
hey cool down dear, actually I'm here to know what thing you disliked in this ad. By the way you were right that target audience is Indian public in this ad. Can you mention that what should I improve in this ad or any suggestion about idea?
I just think that you're trying to convey your idea with too many ideas in one communication. A long slog to the payoff and no surprise, only confusion which means a second or third look to try and work it out. A good ad is one where you see it at a glance and you get it instantly and it's remembered for a long time after. Sorry but yours is the opposite.
seems like you're trying to fit a whole script into one shot. i'm not digging it. as for the idea, it's not too interesting anymore. We've seen plenty of these super glare type of ads for various products ranging from teeth whitener to shoe shine.
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ha ha ha ha ha ha very funny.....and very goooood...
in the thumbnail under the photo,put some shine stars on the teeth ,it would be more clear.......
i jus love this......keep it up
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This must be something only Indians get. All I see is a very clumsy way to illustrate whiteness. Absolutely no relation to white teeth, if that's what you're trying to do. Don't go showing this to any CDs.
hey......dear da Vosk, here we are for to judge the creative, say sometyhing about that, NOT ABOUT ANY COUNTRY, so why forcing the country here,
so, Incase if have brain, pls. Think first what u writing.
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What's your problem? I can mention any country I like.
I only implied that it was maybe something appreciated by a local audience, ie: India.
Don't get shirty with me if you have an inferiority complex. You're implying that I'm making a comment based on race?
You are mistaken and need to look at what you write before opening your mouth.
I love cricket and admire your country and its people. You however, I take exception.
hey cool down dear, actually I'm here to know what thing you disliked in this ad. By the way you were right that target audience is Indian public in this ad. Can you mention that what should I improve in this ad or any suggestion about idea?
Think, Act, Invent.
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thanks guys for commenting, but I need more comments so comment please as much as possible.
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I just think that you're trying to convey your idea with too many ideas in one communication. A long slog to the payoff and no surprise, only confusion which means a second or third look to try and work it out. A good ad is one where you see it at a glance and you get it instantly and it's remembered for a long time after. Sorry but yours is the opposite.
Is that ok with you viky.
ya....there is good comment are all expecting frm any senior....
so pls...be like that only...........
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I'll say whatever I like and if you don't like it, bad luck.
comment please !
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too good! cha gaye mere dost. ekdum jhakaas
too good! cha gaye mere dost. ekdum jhakaas
Sorry i just dont get it
seems like you're trying to fit a whole script into one shot. i'm not digging it. as for the idea, it's not too interesting anymore. We've seen plenty of these super glare type of ads for various products ranging from teeth whitener to shoe shine.
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