Human Rights Movie Week

im ready for harsh and constructive feedback....

i like ur concept

the concept is good..

thanks, any room for improvement....?

by seeing this only one questiin came to my mind.

if this just a rough sketch then how good would be the final one/..
very good..keep it up.if the caption was more strong, then it would had been more better.

love anything creative
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Thank you frogil.... ::blush blush::
but im not the one that you should give credit to
hail to our illustrator.... he is very very good and fast... hehehehe

errr.. nishat bed linens gets 200++ comments... and i get 6?
it's just not fair.......

and 3 of them is from me (4! if you count this...)

Hahaha, iswanda. Try being cocky. You might catch up.

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http://alvinpck.deviantart.com/gallery/

I think im gonna do that alvin.. thanks so much
i think im gonna change the title to "the best ad in the world, and your ad suck!!!" sumthin like that maybe?

crafting nda! good concept is nothing without good execution

nice man!!
good concept.

yeah i think i need to improved the craftmanship....... thank you darbotz
that all stuff at the top left is mandatory (arrrrggghhhh... i know)

case closed.... thank you all

Hey, I like the first and third...they are powerful and the concept is gud.Are you going photography the visualizer is good to.
keep it up.

I like it.

thank you clief and ivan...really appreciate it.....
i think imm going with retro illustration.. like a vintage print ad

nice work.. really liked the concept and execution.. lines needs to b more catchy..

over all: good three

re-work the lines...overall is fine.

maybe it doesnt need a line?
just a simple : human rights movie week

yep, 'human rights movie week' says everything. i like your concept as well - the only thing for me is that your 'human loves human' logo looks like, well, porn ;) is this an existing logo?

yes the logo is the existing logo.... and me is the one you can blame for creating that porn logo...
you can blame my client also because they choosed them...hahahaha
peace out

I don't really like it that much (sorry). I've seen so many ads using the historical bad guys (Hitler, Ben Laden, KKK, Bush...) so the idea has to be really good if you want to use them (like this one http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/live_poker_kkk for example).

okay martjin.... the link that you give me is a very nice ad...but i think im still keeping this one

Like the concept very much.
I personally would explore different lines of artwork. allthough this is GOOD ART, try other alternatives to see which might suit the concept better.

A good visual concept needs not too many copies...it's overkill bro..

I guess a simple "Human rights movies that moves" positioned diagonally at the right corner, wrapped in the film frame ribbon with a small font would do...(notice the visual poetry in 'movies' and 'moves'..heheh)

or, it can be just plain text with a movie frame icon, to make it even more simpler...

Just my two cents in Indonesian Rupiah bro..peace! :) RICO

Nice concept but would agree there is too much copy. The final execution will be crucial for these but I think you know that already. Best of luck.

thank you

You've got one freaking amazing illustrator! Is this really a sketch?

adolfs wears the bandage on the upper arm!