695 pencils HIV campaign 4 Africa
Pouts 695 pencils | Sat, 2006-06-17 09:34
Copy: More than 70% of people nfected since 2003 live in sub saharan africa
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i like it very much..
but copy should have been away from the visual.
Helps Focus !
otherwise i find the idea very good.
( you a student or professional ? )
..Akash
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Agree.
Student
thanks for your proposal anyway it looks much better now gulo. Thanks!
no probs
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Good
where was the copy placed earlier?
the copy was center-alligned right below the bow
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Yes that's true in the first version i place the copy in the center but now it's much better i think
nice thing..
cool
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Not bad. Just one question, how come it is Amnesty International? As I Know Amnesty deals with totally something else. Correct me if i am wrong.
Desi
www.DesiCreative.com
give him a break, it's just a student's experiment.
Actually you are right but in my country we have a campaign named stop aids and i created that ad for a class
so i just wanted to add an international organization. Maybe Unicef would be more approrpiate, thanks
anyway!
Shit Poutie how did i mis that ?
frankly kiddo your ad does not need any name of a big organisation. Its good enough.
so if possible remove the Amnesty logo, before you start getting negative responses based
on that.
also see if you can use a better font for ur copy.
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good, I like it
One of the best in this site!!!!!!!
i don even know u.
but i feel happy for u after the last comment.
although i believe Guest comments should not be taken seriously.
the reason being that there should be a certain identity involved. plus you cannot track their comments.
100 guests.
50 asses. 50 best.
Who is who ...no one can guess.
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Hi,
thank you so much. I've just posted the final version no Amnesty better fonts!
Thanks for you Direction!
P.S. I agree with you on the "Guests"
anytime..
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bravo! - it's great.
clear, elegant composition with strong communication. that ribbon makes me "wow!" - there's no need to adding here any words.
p.s. I've made a couple antiAIDS campaign in my country, it;s a hard job - clients are not so open-minded as f.e. in USA. so 4 me U've great job - I'm lookin forward!
Thank you very much for your comments i also wish clients everywhere were open-minded i think that we should
all join our forces and create a web campaign to open clients minds!
excellent!
I like this one very much! Simple yet striking!
What a nice ad! it surely made me say WOW!!!! Congrats Pouts
POUTie.....
way to go kiddo!way to go.....
i always check out this one
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Genius!!! no words:)
great idea....
Divyesh Kansagara
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The Art of Simplicity. GOOD JOB! Keep Up
Really nice ad. I just want to add that I absolutely loved the way people here, especially gulo, really helped and had something constructive to say. This is how it should be. Sad that it isn't always like this.
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Hey Pouts
i like the way you think. and the way you are open to suggestions. Fantastic work! Am sure you'll go places
Thank you very much for your good words, thanks
great......i really liked it.
AdDavid
Good thought, Pouts. I'm new, and hope will see more such work from you.
very very very nice work Pouts.
as you said AdDavid, it's nice to have good student work with fresh ideas.
hadi syriani
Rightly said, hadi syriani. In fact, i will always remain a student.
HI GUYS I NEED YOUR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIQUE ON THIS AD CAUSE I"M ABOUT TO SEND IT FOR A STUDENT AWARDS COMPETITION THANKS
Solid ad. It doesnt take the viewer on much of a stretch but sometimes thats a strength in itself...
My only advice is to have a look at some ads of its genre and take note of the font size and position relative to the logo. I would suggest a different font, smaller, and connected close to the logo.
When you separate them physically like that you create a 3 sections of your ad with no real purpose, it limits flow and disrupts your negative space.
Good thought. Good luck...
Thankssss
It's good! Go for it!
Perfect!
very good...keep it up!
~ old habits die hard, older ones never do ~
I would say... yeah ok, it's nice. But somehow I find it "predictable". The shape of the African continent plus the symbol.... well hmmmnnn.
it's a good ad, still student, eh? Well, bright future ahead then..! :)
Thanks i will post another another execution of this idea hope for comments, thanks Chris.
very very creative.
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