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Eugens's picture
Eugens
2630 pencils

it's cool, I like it. Maybe better if there was a human in the picture?

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

I like this ! Just center the seat more, (the distance between the copy and the seat is to big) and I would make the bubble at bit bigger and remove the white outline around the pack (unless it really is like that).
This is great, good work

wichi's picture
wichi
20 pencils

I like it but this need to be a campaign.
Make more executions!!
Really nice.

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

I've tweaked the Art Direction (SEE Lost voice (neater)) based on Stigsets Advice. And Thanks all.

Wichl - Yep thanks, it will be a campaign soon. Other places may be In a plantpot, On a shelf, Under a rug, Stuck to someones back?? Under the bed. Anyone think of any other classic hiding places?? Cheers

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

much better...

Pouts's picture
Pouts
691 pencils

That's good stuff! well done i would agree with wichi that more excutions might mbe needed!

Copy_Can's picture
Copy_Can

Much, much better. Do two more for a campaign and you've got a decent piece for your book.

Think really odd or zany places you can lose your speech. Think really, really odd. Good lucK!

aj_stone1981's picture
aj_stone1981
482 pencils

Nice art direction.

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