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Golds Gym

advert2ad's picture
advert2ad
Activity Score 237

Good IDEA......
2.5 /5..
Cheers.

-Cheers,
Sandy

tiny_wordz's picture
tiny_wordz
Activity Score 325

nice idea. but i think you need to work on the art direction a little bit more. the needle should not bend upwards alone but into loops and compressed. the background needs a little more work as well.

jiblp's picture
jiblp
Activity Score 84

Comments Please!

I need a feedback here

Kamikaze's picture
Kamikaze
Activity Score 716

Nice idea pal... but rework on your art and try doing wat tiny_wordz suggests ... i feel if you show more corrugations it'll look much better... nice idea, congrats... I think the simplicity in this can bring out an entire campaign on these lines...

Cheers!!!

- The trick to forgetting the big picture is to look at everything close-up.

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Stigset
Activity Score 1454

Sorry but am I the only one that think that this doesn't work at all ? The message I get is that the guy got strong using steroids, and he used them so much that he can't get the needle in annymore, hardly a message you would have for a gym.
But maybe I got the message wrong.

jiblp's picture
jiblp
Activity Score 84

The idea is that the gym gives you a "hard body"... so the needles (doctor) cant get through... You have a point, but I still think that this ad works

Stigset's picture
Stigset
Activity Score 1454

In my opinion needles and bodybuilding implies steroids way to much. I would try to find somethind else than a needle, maybe the thing you use to measure the heart beat (not the stetoscope but the instrument you scratch to your arm) all ripped up. Just an Idea...
Good luck

jiblp's picture
jiblp
Activity Score 84

I appreciate your help... thanxs mate

Anyone else? Comments

jiblp's picture
jiblp
Activity Score 84

no more comments people?

weighter's picture
weighter
Activity Score 744

steriods. sorry.

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