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- The first one is great! I love the visual.
- The second, comes in second.
- The third feels like a seperate idea (and the pearl isn't reading as a golfball, although I like that visual if pulled together).
- The fourth is the weakest. And the fifth seems like the visual was working too hard to be put into the campaign, although a more directing line could bring it back in.
Great work for something that could have been much more boring. These look too good to be student, how were these assembled?
Hi, these are my work. I am not a student, I just wanted to get your opinion. I agree that there are some problems about the campain being a whole..
The first one is nice. The rest feel after thoughts. Art Direction needs tweaking.
I like the first one too. The rest is a bit forced.
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