Global warming

Global warning
It's time to act, save mother earth.

Global warming

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whitespace's picture
whitespace
1953 pencils

Lovely. The lighting is dramatic, the dark clouds relevant, the visual message direct.

I feel that copy might be shortened to its essence though.

Wordnerd's picture
Wordnerd
6662 pencils

yeah, looks good. Maybe i'm overthinking this, but: what is the message here? the smoke forms the world. if you stop global warming (-> stop the smoke) the world will be gone. is there a reason why you chose to show the continents in the smoke?

Guess the copy might fix that. Like 'It's everywhere.' or something.

I was also confused to see only three of those chimneys active. did you want to show that we're already on the right way to save it?

It delivers a message, but it's not so clear for me.

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