female foeticide




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just a rough thought...hence have not put any logo

please tell me if its working...



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can we know the brief pls.?!

priyanka_sabnis's picture

i just realised that X and O can make the female sign...

there is no brief as such...just want to convey that killing someone is not a game...
women deserve to live longer.

if the ad is not conveying it...then i have got my message

sorry it's not

it's more about combinating and complete each other.

let's c other comments on it

Is this a tic tac toe pun ? the visual isn't very clear, and it doesn't convey that women should live longer, sorry....

priyanka_sabnis's picture

thanks for all your comments...
It is tic tac toe...'dont play with their lives'is more of what i want to say

I think the message is just simply wrong. It's like pointing out that the sky is blue and water is wet. 'Women deserve to live longer' sounds just a bit ridiculous to me. Try a new angle is my suggestion.

http://www.reinhardkrug.de/

I think the tic tac toe idea is good but the way you're displaying it doesn't work. make the grid look more like a tic tac toe board (ie square) and stabilize the x so it looks more like an x and we can get the connotation easily.

himanshu_vision's picture

Idea z very goodddddd, but exxcusn is very Bad.

Hi Priyanka_Sabnis

try playing with the text, personally I like your simplicity and the use of the white space . If you want to have text that different make it very different as in

"women have a right to life" just a personal thing I would prefer the word life

and then in the next line "DON'T PLAY WITH THEIR LIVES". I would make the text 10x larger and maybe in a different font .
Are you familiar with CRAP contrast, repetition, alignment and proximity. I like your ideas and you have
helped me in what you have done ,

thanks

Funky_Frogii's picture

NICE ONE...........GOOD..........

sonygeorge's picture

the idea is coool....
but its little difficult to convey the message...

Simple n awsome..

dododen's picture

ITS FOETICIDE..not FEOTICIDE

Dennis
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