Submitted by popdistortion on Mon, 2007-04-02 10:54.
I think the message is just simply wrong. It's like pointing out that the sky is blue and water is wet. 'Women deserve to live longer' sounds just a bit ridiculous to me. Try a new angle is my suggestion.
I think the tic tac toe idea is good but the way you're displaying it doesn't work. make the grid look more like a tic tac toe board (ie square) and stabilize the x so it looks more like an x and we can get the connotation easily.
try playing with the text, personally I like your simplicity and the use of the white space . If you want to have text that different make it very different as in
"women have a right to life" just a personal thing I would prefer the word life
and then in the next line "DON'T PLAY WITH THEIR LIVES". I would make the text 10x larger and maybe in a different font .
Are you familiar with CRAP contrast, repetition, alignment and proximity. I like your ideas and you have
helped me in what you have done ,
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can we know the brief pls.?!
i just realised that X and O can make the female sign...
there is no brief as such...just want to convey that killing someone is not a game...
women deserve to live longer.
if the ad is not conveying it...then i have got my message
sorry it's not
it's more about combinating and complete each other.
let's c other comments on it
Is this a tic tac toe pun ? the visual isn't very clear, and it doesn't convey that women should live longer, sorry....
thanks for all your comments...
It is tic tac toe...'dont play with their lives'is more of what i want to say
I think the message is just simply wrong. It's like pointing out that the sky is blue and water is wet. 'Women deserve to live longer' sounds just a bit ridiculous to me. Try a new angle is my suggestion.
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I think the tic tac toe idea is good but the way you're displaying it doesn't work. make the grid look more like a tic tac toe board (ie square) and stabilize the x so it looks more like an x and we can get the connotation easily.
Idea z very goodddddd, but exxcusn is very Bad.
Hi Priyanka_Sabnis
try playing with the text, personally I like your simplicity and the use of the white space . If you want to have text that different make it very different as in
"women have a right to life" just a personal thing I would prefer the word life
and then in the next line "DON'T PLAY WITH THEIR LIVES". I would make the text 10x larger and maybe in a different font .
Are you familiar with CRAP contrast, repetition, alignment and proximity. I like your ideas and you have
helped me in what you have done ,
thanks
NICE ONE...........GOOD..........
the idea is coool....
but its little difficult to convey the message...
Simple n awsome..
ITS FOETICIDE..not FEOTICIDE
Dennis
CD