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Got this idea, not sure is it the best way yet?

Help you guys can give some input, Cheers! :)

ivan's picture

Hey you had a CMYK jpeg. It's better to have an RGB one.

Anyway, I think the idea is too specific and complicated. The message surely can be delivered simpler.

But, there is an idea in it, so keep it up.

stsanto's picture
Activity Score 672

"Lauguage" ???

this is not original too, I've seen a joke site with this exam question answered by stupid student.

Nate_Davis's picture
Activity Score 22

I think I would find it more engaging if you could show me a truly imaginative use of language. Not that negative ads are always bad, but for this client it seems like there should be some great possibilities, so the simple equation you show doesn't seem interesting enough. Good client though; keep at it!