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Criticisms, please.
Don't need the line. You get it without the full stop which just adds another idea to it.
Thank you very much.
More comments, please.
with a better execution and without the line, it would be a very cool ad.
Second. I'd like to see it photoshopped onto a real road at night, same perspective (bird's eye) with a car on the left, and the headlights illuminating the lines. That'd add a little creepiness to it.
Not entirely un-clever ;) Nice thinking :) I agree, lose everything except the logo, which should be about half as big.
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"I saw a subliminal ad executive once, but only for a second." - The Wright
www.ryanfox.ca
execution can be much better
u can show that the bottle is getting smaller and at the end just a ful_ stop - - - - .
This is MUCH better, but I still think it can be pushed a little further. I think the lines on the road are too blatant and "harsh". I'd like to see them disappearing into darkness, and the car's headlights lighting the road.
But overall, much improved.
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"I saw a subliminal ad executive once, but only for a second." - The Wright
www.ryanfox.ca
Yes, show a real road.
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