the trouble i have with the "lingerie" one is that it seems more like a swimsuit than lingerie. lingerie is usually silky or lace riddled or very very very skimpy, the diamonds, though beautiful, are solid and heavy looking.
i like the moon one. no changes or critisism comes to mind.
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Not sexy. Not convincing.
And why ????
The idea is a bit complicated. Are you trying to convince to make him buy lingerie or diamonds? The moon sort of works.
2 out of 5 for moon.jpg
0.5 out of 5 for the lingerie.
-Cheers,
Sandy
I feel, th idea is quite nice... but desperately needs good art-direction....
Cheers!!!
- The trick to forgetting the big picture is to look at everything close-up.
2nd lingery?? For me it was a smily so I thought noooo, please noooo. But lingery isnt coming out of it, it too much communicates smily
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the trouble i have with the "lingerie" one is that it seems more like a swimsuit than lingerie. lingerie is usually silky or lace riddled or very very very skimpy, the diamonds, though beautiful, are solid and heavy looking.
i like the moon one. no changes or critisism comes to mind.
Doesn't work. You're writing lines to fit imagery you've found.
Strategy MUST come first.
Catch no ball, sorry dude
sorry guys but 2 forced
Perhaps they were referring to the diamonds as expensive lingerie.