Condom




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A simple n strait idea...

Art Director- Gargi Singh
Copywriter- Pragya

Feedback invited !!

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mmackinven's picture

it's a scary looking condom...

dododen's picture

A simple but a very complex one too...no idea, no art, no concept
No relation to the product....

revise

Dennis
CD
www.topnotch-india.com

sanyal.sanjeet's picture

nice idea
but very bad artdirection, comdom is very scary............ and bad color also..and man looks already die.........

second_creator's picture

liked it

copywriter
mumbai
Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

second_creator's picture

liked it

copywriter
mumbai
Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

second_creator's picture

liked it

copywriter
mumbai
Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

second_creator's picture

liked it

copywriter
mumbai
Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

second_creator's picture

liked it

copywriter
mumbai
Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

second_creator's picture

liked it

copywriter
mumbai
Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

second_creator's picture

liked it

copywriter
mumbai
Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

dude.. what condom is THIS?? I'd never put anything in there :P

capton john's picture

idea is good but execution is too bad & that's why
I didn't liked it!
I didn't liked it!
I didn't liked it!
I didn't liked it!
I didn't liked it!

MAN need to improve artwork.

Think, Act, Invent.
http://captonjohn.deviantart.com
http://captonjohn.blogspot.com

Its only words...'s picture

Relax guys...ths no prof art directn....jst amateur wrk.....jst luk et the idea...fr all thos who don get it...its ben mad lik a parachute and hence the line....thats it....

dododen's picture

Oh Yes Pragya, we are all talking about the concept only....its not gud

Dennis
CD

wearmysocks's picture

It's ok. I didn't like it as much as second_creator though obviously :P

priyanka_sabnis's picture

Seems second_creator has like it a lil too much...

"land in trouble"...This must be a copy writer's idea...probably that s why the art guy didnt bother to put in his efforts.

All sympathies to the copywriter! sigh!

Its only words...'s picture

As i said...an amateur wrk...the persn who did the art wasn evn an art persun...jst an idea defnitly to be wrkd up on art..

Cheers
Pragya...:)

Its only words...'s picture

Oh yes...
Mr. Dennis....remember ur wrds......u wud change ur opinion if it wins an award otherwise not....a lota hypocritical views out thr wth u....

Cheers
Pragya...:)

dododen's picture

Oh yes i will,,,but i know it can't be a winner
Dennis
CD

Its only words...'s picture

N by the way wats an idea accordin to u....jst sumthin tht gets into ur head?

dododen's picture

No it should get into the heads of your target...then it will be successful
Dennis
CD

let's not get personal. This is not a bad idea, but it isn't something that will get you a job, nor an award.... i hope you can see that

nd tr t lt go n th strtslng, u r frm nd nt la

Great Concept Pragya. But could have seemed better if had been executed well !!

Its only words...'s picture

Cn u decode ths part of ur cumment....
......n th strtslng, u r frm nd nt la

"entertainment without protection can lead to trouble" this line cud have described it.. i think..!!

may b i am wrong... ALWAYS !!!

the same idea was done for mtv india or channel V india (for public awareness) i don't remember. but its done for sure.

your work is your identity.
http://harshikcreations.blogspot.com/

Citizen13's picture

Durex did something close,
except that they used a hot air balloon instead of a parachute.
Saw it on AOTW facebook group.
Here's a link: http://imgfreehost.com/out.php?i16792_durexadextrathick.jpg

Its only words...'s picture

Hey thanks....jst visited the link....never new such an ad existed...n the execution is so close to one of the ways i made it bt rejectd sinc it es gettin too obvious....ws ths ad published.....

Cheers
Pragya...:)

Its only words...'s picture

Cn i hav the link of the MTV ad u mentnd....

u shld rlly cnsdr tpng wth vwlls, as cpwrtr t psss me off to c a sms-lngge lk ths, its lmst s bd as your ad...

dododen's picture

U r right pieter
Dennis
CD

Its only words...'s picture

Xcus me? Who asked u to judge people fr their skills out here....n by the way ivan never mentioned your name in the regulatory body fr ths sit...so u shd seriously consider keepin ths suggestion wth u...
Callin others ideas r bad is easy....cuming up with gud one urself is nt...u need ths one badly chap....

relax, they're only words.... with vowells :-)

idea is good but really the execution is little bit scary.so dude work on execution.i know u can do it.

always think for good.

This is just bad!

lol :-)

Sorry but this is really bad. As a copywriter, if I had to take this to my Creative Director, I better have my resignation typed also.

Adaddicted's picture

Expect anything when you upload it for critic. If its amateur or whatever else.

I approve the above submitted comments are true to the best of my knowledge!
STAMPED!

withalltherespects

I hope he doesn't have spikes on his boots!

here's another such idea: a dogcatcher catching babies with a condom on a stick.
rimshot.

kids, unless your last names are dangerfield and you have to be silly to get the ladies don't do this kind of stuff.